Sept. 18, 2021
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I planned to show some of my diaries here to my students, because I wanted to show them the diversity and possibility of the world. And I also wanted to let them get in touch with knowledge or the beauty of learning a new language. However, plans never go as what we want.
I told them that it was very impolite to treat their Chinese teacher like that. They shouldn't chatted, went to the toilet fruquently, imitated her accent, etc. The reason they behaved like that was they thought the teacher was delicate. They were bullying.
They didn't pay any attention to the classroom hygiene either. There were rubbish everywhere, which was really bad for our health. It just looked like they were living in a dump, it was so disguisting.
Furthermore, they never tried to study hard and gave up their study early. They never had any experience of trying hard to do something, so they couldn't have the excitement of success.
Three weeks have passed, I never got any enjoyment from teaching them.
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I planned to show some of my diaries here to my students, because I wanted to show them the diversity and possibilitytential of the world.
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They didn't pay any attention to the classroom hygiene either.
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Furthermore, they never tried to study hard, and often gave up their study early.
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Three weeks have passed, and I never got any enjoyment from teaching them.
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I planned to show some of my diaries here to my students, because I wanted to show them the diversity and possibility of the world. I planned to show some of my diaries here to my students, because I wanted to show them the diversity and po |
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And I also wanted to let them get in touch with knowledge or the beauty of learning a new language.
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However, plans never go as what we want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I told them that it was very impolite to treat their Chinese teacher like that. I told them that it was very impolite to treat their Chinese teacher like that. This should go after the explanation of what "that" is. |
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They shouldn't chatted, went to the toilet fruquently, imitated her accent, etc. They shouldn't have chatted, |
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The reason they behaved like that was they thought the teacher was delicate. The reason they behaved like that was that they thought the teacher was |
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They were bullying. They were bullying them. |
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They didn't pay any attention to the classroom hygiene either. They didn't pay any attention to |
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There were rubbish everywhere, which was really bad for our health. There w |
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It just looked like they were living in a dump, it was so disguisting. It |
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Furthermore, they never tried to study hard and gave up their study early. Furthermore, they never tried to study hard, and often gave up their study early. |
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They never had any experience of trying hard to do something, so they couldn't have the excitement of success. They never |
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Three weeks have passed, I never got any enjoyment from teaching them. Three weeks have passed, and I never got any enjoyment from teaching them. |
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