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ponta

Nov. 5, 2020

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A Stink Bug

Today, a stink bug came into a room when I was taking a class. I don't like insects and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquid, so I evacuated to another table. However, the stink bug flew around the room, and its buzz was horrible. I couldn't concentrate on the class until the bug disappeared.

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A Stink Bug

Today, a stink bug came into athe room when I was taking a class.

I don't like insects, and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquid, so I evacuated to another table.

However, the stink bug flew around the room, and its buzz was horrible.

I couldn't concentrate on the class until the bug disappeared.

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We have something similar here in Texas. They're called June bugs. They can emit a smell if you squish them and they buzz *very* loudly. How long did it take for the bug to go away? (Not long, I hope.)

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ponta

Nov. 6, 2020

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It was about 10min. Just thinking about squashing a stink bug makes me shudder :(

A Stink Bug

Today, a stink bug came into athe room when I was taking a class.

I think 'the' should be used here because you are referring to a particular room (the one that you were in), not just any room.

I don't like insects and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquids, so I evacuated to another table.

However, the stink bug flew around the room, and its buzz was horrible.

I couldn't concentrate on the class until the bug disappeared.

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Haha. Yeah, I get super bothered by bugs too.
Good job! Almost perfect.

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ponta

Nov. 6, 2020

217

Thank you so much!

A Stink Bug


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Today, a stink bug came into a room when I was taking a class.


Today, a stink bug came into athe room when I was taking a class.

I think 'the' should be used here because you are referring to a particular room (the one that you were in), not just any room.

Today, a stink bug came into athe room when I was taking a class.

I don't like insects and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquid, so I evacuated to another table.


I don't like insects and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquids, so I evacuated to another table.

I don't like insects, and stink bugs occasionally emit smelly liquid, so I evacuated to another table.

However, the stink bug flew around the room, and its buzz was horrible.


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I couldn't concentrate on the class until the bug disappeared.


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