March 12, 2024
A Spring Outing
It was supposed to be a hike last Saturday, but it finally came to be a spring outing.
Because I had a stomach ache at the beginning of the hike, I decided to slow down and enjoy the scenery along the trail. Luckily, there were many flowers and waterfalls because spring was coming, and I had enough time to shoot pictures and videos. You can watch one of them here: https://youtu.be/u2oPS90g8Fs
Maybe I will add some subtitles to this video tonight when I get home.
Here are some outlines:
1. There are streams all the way up the hill. Spring is coming. There is more water running in the streams, lively and exultantly.
2. Looking up, I saw a breeze blowing through the treetops, and a cherry tree in the distance was blooming.
3. Another cherry tree in bloom, and a waterfall!
4. There is a cherry tree in bloom too, at the top left of the waterfall. Nature is amazing. I didn't see a river when I walked at the top of the hill, but here it is, a waterfall coming from nowhere.
5. Many magnolia trees are blooming in the mountains, but this one is special. It just stands beside the road, posing beautifully. I can even touch the flowers, but I do not, I want to be a polite passer-by.
6. Here is almost the highest spot this day. Because of the humid and cloudy weather, the sky is not very clear. But I still love it. I think it is the artistic conception of "misty clouds" in ancient poetry.
一次春游
上周六本该是徒步的，结果变成了一次春游。
因为刚开始徒步肚子就疼了起来，我索性放慢脚步，欣赏起沿途的风景。幸运的是，因为春天的到来，山间有许多的花和瀑布，我有时间拍照拍视频了。你可以在这儿看到其中之一：https://youtu.be/u2oPS90g8Fs
今晚回家后，我大概会给这个视频添上字幕。
大纲如下：
1、上山的沿途一路有溪流。春天来了，小溪中有了更多的水量，活跃欢腾。
2、一抬头，见到微风拂过树梢，远处的樱桃树花开正好。
3、另一棵开花的樱桃树，及一个瀑布。
4、瀑布的左上方，也是一棵满是花开的樱桃树。大自然太神奇了，在山上行走时并未见到河流，但这里，就横空出现了一个瀑布。
5、山里有很多花枝繁茂的玉兰花树，但这一棵是特别的。它就这样站在路边，亭亭玉立，我甚至可以触摸到它的花朵。当然并没有，我只想做个礼貌的过客。
6. 这儿几乎是今天的最高点了。因为潮湿多云的天气，天空并不清透。但我依然很爱，以为是古诗词里“烟云缥缈”的意境。
A Spring Outing
IWhat was supposed to be a hike last Saturday, but it finally came to be turned into a spring outing.
Because I had a stomach ache at the beginning of the hike, I decided to slow down and enjoy the scenery along the trail.
Luckily, there were many flowers and waterfalls because spring was coming, and I had enough time to shoottake some pictures and videos.
You can watch one of them here: https://youtu.be/u2oPS90g8Fs Maybe I will add some subtitles to this video tonight when I get home.
Here are some outlines: 1.
There are streams all the way up the hill.
Spring is coming.
There is more water running in the streams, lively and exultantly.
Looking up, I saw a breeze blowing through the treetops, and a cherry tree in the distance was blooming.
Another cherry tree in bloom, and a waterfall!
There is a cherry tree in bloom too, at the top left of the waterfall.
Nature is amazing.
I didn't see a river when I walked aton the top of the hill, but here it is, a waterfall coming fromout of nowhere.
Many magnolia trees are blooming in the mountains, but this one is special.
It just stands beside the road, posing beautifully.
I can even touch the flowers, but I do not, because I want to be a polite passer-by.
Here is almost the highest spot thisof day.
Because of the humid and cloudy weather, the sky is not very clear.
But I still love it.
I think it is the artistic conception of "misty clouds" in ancient poetry.
March 13, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Have a nice day!
A Spring Outing
It was supposed to be a hike last Saturday, but iat finallythe end it came to be a spring outing.
Because I had a stomach ache at the beginning of the hike, I decided to slow down and enjoy the scenery along the trail.
Luckily, there were many flowers and waterfalls because spring was coming, and I had enough time to shoot pictures and videos.
You can watch one of them here: https://youtu.be/u2oPS90g8Fs Maybe I will add some subtitles to this video tonight when I get home.
Here are some outlines: 1.
There are streams all the way up the hill.
Spring is coming.
There is more water running in the streams, lively and exultantly.
2.
Looking up, I saw a breeze blowing through the treetops, and a cherry tree in the distance was blooming.
3.
Another cherry tree in the process of blooming, and a waterfall!
Nature is amazing.
I didn't see a river when I walked at the top of the hill, but here it is, a waterfall coming from nowhere.
5.
Many magnolia trees are blooming in the mountains, but I felt that this one iwas special.
It just stands beside the road, posing beautifully.
I can even touch the flowers, but I do not want to, I want to be a polite passer-by.
6.
Here iThis was almost the highest spot this day.
Because of the humid and cloudy weather, the sky iwas not very clear.
Even in your past sentences, you have to use the past tense, as this is an action occurring in the past.
But I still love it.
I think it is the artistic conception of "misty clouds" in ancient poetry.
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I would also love to watch the magnificent scenery !
March 13, 2024
Thank you and welcome to Eastern China then I can take you there.
A Spring Outing
IWhat was supposed to be a hike last Saturday, but it finally came turned out to be a spring outing.
Because I had a stomach ache at the beginning of the hike, I decided to slow down and enjoy the scenery along the trail.
There are streams allong the way up the hill.
Spring is coming.
There is more water running in the streams, lively and exultantly/joyful.
Looking up, I saw athe breeze blowing through the treetops, and a cherry tree in the distance was blooming.
AThen another cherry tree in bloom, and a waterfall!
There is a cherry tree in bloom too, at the top left of the waterfall.
Alternative:
On the upper left side of the waterfall, there is also a cherry tree in bloom.
Nature is amazing.
I didn't see a river when I walked at the toping ofn the hill, but here it is, was a waterfall apparently coming from nowhere.
I think ithis is the artistic conception of "misty clouds" in ancient poetry.
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Very nicely written.
March 13, 2024
Thank you so much!
It was supposed to be a hike last Saturday, but it finally cameturned out to be a spring outing.
BecausSince I had a stomach ache at the beginning of the hike, I decided to slow down and enjoy the scenery along the trail.
你本寫也可以但是如果把“因爲”放在句子開頭“since”比“because”好，“because”正常時在句子的中間
Luckily, there were many flowers and waterfalls because spring was coming, and I had enough time to shoot pictures and videos.
You can watch one of them here: https://youtu.be/u2oPS90g8Fs Maybe I will add some subtitles to this video tonight when I get home.
Here are some outlines: 1.
There are streams all the way up the hill.
There is more water running inalong the streams, lively and exultjubilantly.
very poetic
2.
Looking up, I saw a breeze blowing through the treetops, and a cherry tree in the distance was blooming.
3.
Another cherry tree in bloom, and a waterfall!
There is a cherry tree in bloom too, ato the top left of the waterfall.
Nature is amazing.
I didn't see a river whilen I walkeding at the top of the hill, but here it is, a waterfall coming from nowhere.
5.
Many magnolia trees are blooming in the mountains, but this one is special.
It just stands beside the road, posing beautifully.
I can even touch the flowers, but I do not, I want to be a polite passer-by.
6.
HereThis is almost the highest spot thisof the day.
“今天的” = of this day, of the day, today's
Because of the humid and cloudy weather, the sky is not very clear.
But I still love it.
I think ithis is thehow artistic conception ofs imagine "misty clouds" in ancient poetry.
本句也可以但是這樣說最自然聼
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寫得好，加油
March 12, 2024
谢谢！你的修正让我获益匪浅！
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