A speech (Please help me🥰)

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May 21, 2023

A speech (Please help me🥰)

Good morning everyone!

Thank you for the opportunity and support from my company XX and my supervisor Miranda. I’m so excited to be here today, my name is Annie and my topic is “live for more than work, find your passion in life”. Before we get started, I want to ask you a question, what’s your passion? Try to think about it.

I was born and raised in a small village in Sichuan. I always love exploring the world, talking to different people and speaking English since I was a kid. I went to Melbourne alone when I’m 21, and that’s my first overseas trip. I was going to plan more trips like that but due to pandemic, I cannot go anywhere. I found another way to speak to people from different places, which is on Red, 小红书. I have became a live streamer since then and try to hold some all-English livestream in my spare time. I named it “Online English Chatroom”.

Our passion for English brought us together. I talked to people from all walks of life, all over the world, a music therapist from Shanghai, an acupuncturist from Australia, a paragliding coach, a documentary director, a surgeon and so on. A few participants are impressive from memory, Now I want to share them with you all.

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helium02

Good morning, everyone!

Thank you for the opportunity and support from my company XX and my supervisor Miranda.

I’m so excited to be here today, my name is Annie and my topic is “live for more than work, find your passion in life”.

Before we get started, I want to ask you a question, what’s your passion?

Try to think about it.

I was born and raised in a small village in Sichuan.

I always love exploring the world, talking to different people and speaking English since I was a kid.

I went to Melbourne alone when I’m 21, and that’ was my first overseas trip.

I was going to plan more trips like that but due to pandemic, I cannot go anywhere.

I found another way to speak to people from different places, which is on Red, 小红书.

I have becaome a live streamer since then and try to hold some all-English livestream in my spare time.

I named it “Online English Chatroom”.

Our passion for English brought us together.

I talked to people from all walks of life, all over the world, a music therapist from Shanghai, an acupuncturist from Australia, a paragliding coach, a documentary director, a surgeon and so on.

A few participants are impressive from memory, Now I want to share them with you all.

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Keep up the great work!

peppermints

Good morning everyone!

Thank you for the opportunity and support from my company XX and my supervisor Miranda. / Thank you (my) company XX for the opportunity and support, and thank you my supervisor Miranda

I’m so excited to be here today~~, m~~. My name is Annie, and my topic is “live for more than work, find your passion in life”.

Before we get started, I want to ask you a question~~, w~~. What’s your passion?

Try to think about it.

I was born and raised in a small village in Sichuan.

I've always loved exploring the world, talking to different people, and speaking English since I was a kid.

I went to Melbourne alone when I’m was 21, and that’ was my first overseas trip.

I was going to plan more trips like that, but due to the pandemic, I canould not go anywhere.

I found another way to speak to people from different places, which is on Red, 小红书.

I have becaome a live streamer since then, and I try to hold some all-English livestreams in my spare time.

I named it “Online English Chatroom”.

Our passion for English brought us together.

I talked to people from all walks of life, all over the world, a music therapist from Shanghai, an acupuncturist from Australia, a paragliding coach, a documentary director, a surgeon and so on.

A few participants are impressive from memory,. / A few participants stand out from my memory. Now I want to share them with you all.

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Really good work! I'm just being picky with most of my corrections lol.

Good morning everyone!