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I am in the bus at the moment and today is a special day of my life because I'll learn a news that maybe changes All my life it's about going abroad.In my school There is a project for just our class I hope I'll be chosen among 18 student If I learn the choice I'm gonna feedback ☺️
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I am ion the bus at the moment, and today is a special day of my life because I'll learn asoon have news that maybeight changes my whole life.
All my life iIt's about going abroad.
InAt my school T, there is a special project for just our class.
I hope I'll be chosen among 18the 18 other students.
IfWhen I learn the choice I'm gonna feedbackwho was chosen, I'll update you. ☺️
You will know who got chosen, it is just a matter of time. So "when" not "if"
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Great job. Wishing you luck!
A special day of my life
I am riding the bus at the moment and t. Today is a special day of my life, because I'll learn aget news that will maybe changes my whole life.
There's a few ways to change "learn a news" to sound more natural. Any of these also work:
"because I'll learn something that..."
"because I'll find out something that..."
"because I'm expecting news that..."
All my life iIt's about going abroad.
In my school T, there is a project for just for our class.
I hope I'll be chosen among the 18 students chosen.
This correction says that there will be 18 students chosen, and you hope you are one of them.
If you mean there are 18 students and you hope you are the one chosen, you can say:
"I hope I'll be the one chosen from the 18 students (in my class)."
If I learn theI'm choicesen, I'm gonna leave feedback ☺️
"I'm gonna feedback" sounds like slang, but adding "leave" makes it clearer!
Feedback
Good luck! I hope you are chosen!!
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I am in the bus at the moment and today is a special day of my life because I'll learn a news that maybe changes I am riding the bus at the moment There's a few ways to change "learn a news" to sound more natural. Any of these also work: "because I'll learn something that..." "because I'll find out something that..." "because I'm expecting news that..." I am |
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All my life it's about going abroad.
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I hope I'll be chosen among 18 student I hope I'll be This correction says that there will be 18 students chosen, and you hope you are one of them. If you mean there are 18 students and you hope you are the one chosen, you can say: "I hope I'll be the one chosen from the 18 students (in my class)." I hope I'll be chosen among |
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If I learn the choice I'm gonna feedback ☺️ If I learn "I'm gonna feedback" sounds like slang, but adding "leave" makes it clearer!
You will know who got chosen, it is just a matter of time. So "when" not "if" |
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