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brucezhang

Dec. 11, 2022

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A sorry letter

Dear Jim,
Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history.
However, I am actually very interested in British society and history. I wonder if you can send your notes to me through WeChat after you listen to the lecture
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that youwill be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours,
LiHua

Corrections

A sorrn apology letter

"A sorry letter" is like saying the letter is sorry:)

Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history.

Using "i'm sorry" in the middle of a sentence seems unnatural to me. You could say it at the start.

However, I am actually very interested in British society and history.

I was wondering if you canould send your notes to me through WeChat after you listen to the lecture

"can" will be understood but "could" is better

Please allow me to say sorry again.

I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours,

LiHua

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Good job, it is very clear and easy to understand.

Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history. because I broke my leg the other day.

However, I am actually very interested in British society and history.

Please allow me to say sorryapologize again.

I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours,

A sorry letter


A sorrn apology letter

"A sorry letter" is like saying the letter is sorry:)

Dear Jim,


Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history.


Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history. because I broke my leg the other day.

Because I broke my leg the day before yesterday, I'm sorry I can't attend the lecture on British history.

Using "i'm sorry" in the middle of a sentence seems unnatural to me. You could say it at the start.

However, I am actually very interested in British society and history.


However, I am actually very interested in British society and history.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wonder if you can send your notes to me through WeChat after you listen to the lecture


I was wondering if you canould send your notes to me through WeChat after you listen to the lecture

"can" will be understood but "could" is better

Please allow me to say sorry again.


Please allow me to say sorryapologize again.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I sincerely hope that youwill be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.


I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours,


Yours,

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

LiHua


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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