A smoked food’s Izakaya

A smoked food Izakaya

I met my friend last night. We went to an Izakaya that is popular for its smoked foods.

"Food" is an uncountable noun.

We ordered all sorts of smoked foods in there.E like eggs, cheese, Japanese pickles, meat and seafood. Those were very delicious.

I especially liked egg and Ppork liver. We enjoyed those with Sake. Then, after leaving the Izakaya, we went to next to a dining bar.B because we were not satisfiedanted more to drinking.

We went to a craft beer’s dining bar. I drank craft beer made in Tokyo in there.

"in Tokyo in there" is grammatical but it is good style not to use prepositions more than once per clause.

It was light and fruity, and it was so good.

We had a good time.

I met my friend last night. We went to an Izakaya that is popular for its smoked foods.

Every sentence separated by a period needs at least one space between them.

We ordered all sorts of smoked foods in there.E We ordered eggs, cheese, Japanese pickles, meat and seafood. Thosey were very delicious.

There is a space after every comma as well.

I especially liked the egg, and Ppork liver. We enjoyed thosem with Ssake. Then, after leaving the Izakaya, we went to next a dining bar. Because we were not satisfifinished drinking.

The phrase "egg and pork liver" implies that the liver has both egg and pork. If you are trying to say that you enjoyed "egg", as well as "pork liver", then you will need to add a comma between egg and pork liver. Pork does not need to be capitalized. Sake does not need to be capitalized. Because you started the sentence with "then", using the word "next" in the same sentence is redundant.

We went to craft beer’s dining bar.a dining bar that serves craft beer. I drank craft beer made in Tokyo in there.

It was light and fruity, so good.