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Ducky

Oct. 28, 2021

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A Smile Please.

Yesterday, my girlfriend and me were watching the news in TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models. The most interessant was to see the face of all models. The look of all faces was seria, hard and angry. For some reason, the models never laugh, it is as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear. It is a bit quirky. I think that for possible customer is more attractive to see a models smiling when her wear a fashion clothing in a parade.

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A Smile Please.

Yesterday, my girlfriend and meI were watching the news ion TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models.

The most interessant was to seeting part was seeing the faces of all the models.

The looks of alln their faces wasere seriaous, hard and angry.

For some reason, the models never laugh, it ied. It seems as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear.

It is a bit quirky.

I think that for possible customer iss are more attractived to seeing a models smiling when sher wear as fashionable clothing in a parade.

A Smile Please.


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Yesterday, my girlfriend and me were watching the news in TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models.


Yesterday, my girlfriend and meI were watching the news ion TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models.

The most interessant was to see the face of all models.


The most interessant was to seeting part was seeing the faces of all the models.

The look of all faces was seria, hard and angry.


The looks of alln their faces wasere seriaous, hard and angry.

For some reason, the models never laugh, it is as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear.


For some reason, the models never laugh, it ied. It seems as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear.

It is a bit quirky.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that for possible customer is more attractive to see a models smiling when her wear a fashion clothing in a parade.


I think that for possible customer iss are more attractived to seeing a models smiling when sher wear as fashionable clothing in a parade.

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