Oct. 10, 2024
Last night, I ran about 18.5 kilometers in about three hours.
In case of the malfunction of my smartwatch due to GPS error by the solar flare activities, I tried to run without the monitors by the smartwatch (Garmin, Forerunner 265). Actually, I used it, and got data while running, yet I didn't see it while running.
It turned out there wasn't that difference.
I ran the training course which I had run over hundred times, so I knew the distance quite well.
I was able to specurate my heart rate, and running speed because I had done the same thing over and over.
After finished running, I checked my data on my smartwatch and the bluetues-connected smartphone software, "Garmin Connect."
Lo and behold, my data last night was almost the same as my previous run four days before.
While running, I made a minor course change for changing air, which made me got lost.
I went to a very small country road and it brought me to a small graveyard. There were about ten or twenty tombs there.
I felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and felt scared a bit.
Then, I wanted to go to the restroom for my business, "poop."
I asked Okay Google to identify where I was now, and the nearest covenience store's location and show me how to get there.
Google responded poorly at first, so I couldn't help thinking the participation of the bad spirit/ghost.
Anyway, I should have been more realistic than thinking about such supernatural phenomenon. I needed to poop right away.
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I needed 19 minutes on foot.
I got there in 15 minutes by running, and I was able to finish my business successfully.
昨夜、約3時間で18.5キロメートルを走りました。ソーラーフレア活動によるGPSエラーでスマートウォッチ(Garmin, Forerunner 265)が故障することを想定し、スマートウォッチのモニターを見ないで走る練習を試みました。実際には使用してデータを取得しましたが、走行中はモニターを見ませんでした。
結果として、大きな違いはありませんでした。何百回も走ったトレーニングコースなので、距離はよく分かっていました。同じことを繰り返しているため、心拍数や走行速度も予測できました。走り終わった後にスマートウォッチとBluetooth接続されたスマートフォンの「Garmin Connect」でデータを確認しましたが、4日前の走行とほとんど同じデータでした。
走っている途中、気分転換に少しコースを変更したところ、迷ってしまい、田舎の小道に入り、小さな墓地に迷い込みました。10〜20ほどの墓があり、悪い霊か何かに連れてこられたような気がして少し怖かったです。その時、トイレに行きたくなり、「お通じ」が迫っていました。
Googleアシスタントに自分の現在地と最寄りのコンビニの場所を尋ねましたが、最初はうまく反応してくれず、悪霊のせいではないかとさえ思いました。しかし、現実的に考え直し、すぐにトイレに行く必要があることを優先しました。
最終的に、Googleが徒歩19分のコンビニを案内してくれましたが、走って15分で到着し、無事に用を足すことができました。
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I think this is more natural.
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There were about ten or twenty tombgraves there.
A "tomb" is a constructed vault where a body is placed. A "grave" is where a body is buried in the ground.
It felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and I felt a little scared a bit.
Then, I wantneeded to go to the restroom for my business, "poop.".
I asked Okay Google Assistant to identify where I was now, andand how to get to the nearest convenience store's location and show me how to get there.
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Anyway, I should have been more realistic than thinking about suchthought more logically than jumping to a supernatural phenomenon.
I needed to poop right away.
LOL, just super direct xD
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I neededthat was 19 minutes away on foot.
I got there in 15 minutes by running, and I was able to finish my business successfully.
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I would have also thought of evil spirits, too! I'm glad you were able to avert a disaster, haha
A Smartphone Is More Important than a Smartwatch
Last night, I ran about 18.5 kilometers in about three hours.
In case of the malfunction of my smartwatchSince my smartwatch was malfunctioning due to GPS errors caused by the solar flare activities, I tried to run without the monitors by the smartwatch monitors (Garmin, Forerunner 265).
Actually, I used it, and gotlthough I did wear it, and actually recorded data while running, yet I didn't see it whiluntil I was done (running).
It turned out there wasn't thatany difference (despite the malfunction?).
I ran the training course which I hadve run over hundred times, so I kneow the distance quite well.
I was able to specurestimate my heart rate, and running speed, because I had done the same thing over and over.
After finished running, I checked my data on my smartwatch and the bluetuesooth-connected smartphone software, "Garmin Connect."
Lo and behold, my data from last night was almost the same as my previous run four days before.
While running, I made a minor course change for changing air, which made meand got lost.
I went toas on a very small country road and it brought me to a small graveyard.
There were about ten or twenty tombstones (or "graves") there.
Other people commented about the usage of "tomb". From my American perspective, "tombstone", "gravestone", and "headstone" (more rare) are all the same thing and represent a full burial of a corpse. Since I understand most Japanese are cremated and a stone marker is used to mark the grave, I would use the term "grave" or "grave marker".
I felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and felit scared me a bit.
Then, I wantedhad an urge to go to the restroom for my business, "poop.".
If you want to be casual/funny/a bit crude about how scared you were, you could say "I just about crapped my pants".
I asked Okay Google to identify where I was now, and the nearest covenience store's location, and to show me how to get there.
Alternate that feels a bit more natural:
I asked Google to tell me the way to the nearest convenience store.
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Anyway, I should have been more realistic than thinking about suchlogical than to assume the problem was caused by a supernatural phenomenon.
I(But) I (still) needed to poop right away.
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I needed 19 minutes onaway by foot.
Last night, I ran about 18.5 kilometers in about three hours.
In case of the malfunction of my smartwatchdata issues, due to GPS error by thecaused by recent solar flare activitiesy, I tried to run without using the monitors by theon my smartwatch (Garmin, Forerunner 265).
"malfunction" likely isn't a natural word choice here. It's hard to explain why.. we use malfunction to talk about large things with moving parts (e.g. something in a factory) or sometimes about organs in our body (e.g. "kidney malfunction"). But the meaning and your use of the word makes perfect sense.
You can start your sentence with:
"In case of data issues, due to GPS error caused by recent solar flare activity, ...."
"In case of inaccurate data, due to GPS error caused by recent solar flare activity, ..."
etc.
Actually, I used it, and got data while running, yewas wearing it to collect the data, but I didn't seelook at it whilest I was running.
I'm not 100% sure what this sentence means.
You used your Garmin to track your data during the run, but you didn't look at the data?
It turned out there data wasn't that differencinaccurate.
Or:
"It turned out that the data wasn't that different compared to previous runs"
I ran thea training course which I hadve ruan over a hundred times, so I knew the distance quite well.
I was able to specurapproximate my heart rate, and running speed because I had done the same thingroute over and over.
After finished runninging the run, I checked mythe data on my smartwatch and the bluetues-connected smartphone software, "connected it to my phone via Bluetooth using the Garmin Connect software."
Lo and behold, my data from last night was almost the same as my previous run from four days beforeago.
You could use the word "identical" here:
"Lo and behold, my data from last night was almost identical to my previous run from four days ago."
While running, I made a minor course change for changing air, which made me gotto keep myself motivated, which resulted in me getting lost.
"for changing air" doesn't make sense.
[気分転換] --> meaning you wanted a change of scenery? or you wanted to change to help keep motivated?
I went todown a very small country road and it brought me to a small graveyard.
In English, we don't say "I went to a road", we say we "went down a road".
There were about ten or twenty tombheadstones there.
You may not mean the word "tomb". Tombs are often large structures where many people are buried underground.
You probably meant either:
"graves" or "headstones"
I felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and feltwas rather scared a bit.
The original sentence is okay but using "felt" twice in the same sentence doesn't sound nice.
Then, I wantneeded to go to the restroom. for my business, "poop."
This made me laugh out loud. :D
In English, most people do not announce the reason for going to the toilet. They especially do not use the word "poop"!
I asked Okay Google to identify where I was now, andthe location of the nearest convenience store's location and show me, and how to get there.
Google responded poorly at first, so I couldn't help thinking the participation of that the bad spirit/ghost was involved.
Anyway, I should have been more realisticational than thinking about such supernatural phenomenon.
I needed to poop right awaywas becoming increasingly desperate for a restroom.
Hahaha :D
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I neededthat was 19 minutes away on foot.
I got there in 15 minutes by running, and I was able to finish my business successfullyuse the restroom.
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Great post, well done!
You used some complicated English here and did so very well. I was able to understand pretty much everything you wanted to communicated.
Definitely be mindful of talking about toilet topics. I actually did laugh out loud as it was so surprising to read. Some people may find it funny (like me), or some people may be put-off if you talk about "poop".
At least in the UK, it can be considered slightly bad manners to even reference the toilet. For example, if you wanted to have the best manners, you would say:
"Please excuse me, I'll be back in a moment" and not "Please excuse me, I'm going to the toilet". This is because we don't want to mention or have the other person think about the toilet. Of course, this changes with family and close friends.
A Smartphone Is More Important than a Smartwatch
Last night, I ran about 18.5 kilometers in about three hours.
In case of thea malfunction of my smartwatch due to a GPS error by thecaused by solar flare activities, I triedwas going to run without the monitors byof the smartwatch (Garmin, Forerunner 265).
Actually, I did used it, and got data while running, yet I didn't see it while running.
It turned out there wasn't thatany difference.
I ran the training course which I had run over a hundred times, so I knew the distance quite well.
I was able to specurlate my heart rate, and running speed because I had done the same thing over and over.
After finisheding running, I checked my data on my smartwatch and the bluetuesooth-connected smartphone software, "Garmin Connect."
Lo and behold, my data last night was almost the same as my previous run four days before.
While running, I made a minor course change for changingto get some fresher air, which made me got lost.
I went toalong a very small country road and it brought me to a small graveyard.
There were about ten or twenty tombgravestones there.
A tomb is like an Egyptian pyramid
I felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and felt a bit scared a bit.
Then, I wanted to go to the restroom for my business, "poop."
I asked Okay Google to identify where I was now, and the nearest covenience store's location and show me how to get there.
Google responded poorly at first, so I couldn't help thinking the participation of the bad spirit/ghost was at fault.
Anyway, I should have been more realistic than thinking about such supernatural phenomenon.
I needed to poop right away.
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I needed 19 minutes away on foot.
I got there in 15 minutes by running, and I was able to finish my business successfully.
Feedback
Happy ending!
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