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shishiwu

Dec. 3, 2022

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A small essay

When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career. We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work. According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company.
First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company. I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited. Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work. I can learn more about this job.
Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position. I can preform my capacities in another field. I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me.
In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company.


The topic is about two options upon graduation: one is to work in a small startup and the other in a big established company.
Can you give me some advice to generate a small essay. I don't know how to connect the sentence smoothly and fluently.

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We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.

When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it.

I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean.

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shishiwu

Dec. 4, 2022

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We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.

"usually" is what I want to express. I have never distinguished between these two word before. I just used the word which cross my mind.

When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career.

We almost selectchoose whether to be in a small startup or a big established company to work.

First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me muchore challenges than the big established company.

I am fond of overcoming challenges that can. They make me excited.

Meanwhile the, challenges can make me stronger in theat work.

I can learn more aboutin this job.

Secondly, the startup can give me more chances that I cano change my positions.

I can prerform my capaciduties in another field, too.

I can take carry of otherother types of work and find outa more suitable career for me.

In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work oin a small startup company.

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Nice work :)

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shishiwu

Dec. 4, 2022

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Thank you.

A small essay


When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career.


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We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work.


We almost selectchoose whether to be in a small startup or a big established company to work.

We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.

When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it. I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean.

According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company.


First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company.


First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me muchore challenges than the big established company.

I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited.


I am fond of overcoming challenges that can. They make me excited.

Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work.


Meanwhile the, challenges can make me stronger in theat work.

I can learn more about this job.


I can learn more aboutin this job.

Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position.


Secondly, the startup can give me more chances that I cano change my positions.

I can preform my capacities in another field.


I can prerform my capaciduties in another field, too.

I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me.


I can take carry of otherother types of work and find outa more suitable career for me.

In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company.


In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work oin a small startup company.

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