Dec. 3, 2022
A small essay
When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career. We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work. According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company.
First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company. I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited. Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work. I can learn more about this job.
Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position. I can preform my capacities in another field. I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me.
In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company.
The topic is about two options upon graduation: one is to work in a small startup and the other in a big established company.
Can you give me some advice to generate a small essay. I don't know how to connect the sentence smoothly and fluently.
We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.
When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it.
I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean.
Dec. 4, 2022
We almost (usually?) select in a small startup or a big established company to work. in / in which to work.
"usually" is what I want to express. I have never distinguished between these two word before. I just used the word which cross my mind.
When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career.
We almost selectchoose whether to be in a small startup or a big established company to work.
First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me muchore challenges than the big established company.
I am fond of overcoming challenges that can. They make me excited.
Meanwhile the, challenges can make me stronger in theat work.
I can learn more aboutin this job.
Secondly, the startup can give me more chances that I cano change my positions.
I can prerform my capaciduties in another field, too.
I can take carry of otherother types of work and find outa more suitable career for me.
In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work oin a small startup company.
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Dec. 4, 2022
Thank you.
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A small essay |
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When we prepare to find a job, we will consider our career. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We almost select in a small startup or a big established company to work. We We almost (usually?) select When we “almost” do something, we come very close to doing it, but we don’t actually do it. For example, “I almost missed the bus” means I nearly missed it, but I actually caught it: I didn’t miss the bus, but had I been a few seconds later, I would have missed it. I don’t think you mean to say “almost” in this sentence, but I’m not sure what you do mean. |
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According to my character and my major, I will choose to work in a small startup company. |
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First of all, I think the small startup company can bring me much challenges than the big established company. First of all, I think the small startup company can bring m |
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I fond of overcoming challenges that can make me excited. I am fond of overcoming challenges |
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Meanwhile the challenges can make me stronger in the work. Meanwhile |
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I can learn more about this job. I can learn more |
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Secondly the startup can give me more chance that I can change my position. Secondly, the startup can give me more chances t |
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I can preform my capacities in another field. I can p |
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I can take carry of other work and find out more suitable career for me. I can take |
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In my opinion, these two points are important for me, so I want to work on a small startup company. In my opinion, these two points are important |
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