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basiliomagno

Aug. 5, 2021

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A Skateboarding Story

Now, skateboarding is at the Olympics. I just saw the park competition, it was amazing and reminded me of the times when I practiced skateboarding.
I started alone, but I get friends very soon.
A cousin of mine gave me a board. He was already a skater, but I lived very far from both his house and the center of the city, where the best skate's spots were. That skateboard became an essential for me, I carried it with me all the time. As you can image, I learned the basics very soon, and I started to use it.
One day, I was on a bus and a weird guy, with a strange way of taking, addressed me, he wanted to see my skateboard. I haven't said it, but my board's grip tape had a animal print on it. It looked very cool. The guy asked me where I have bought that grip tape. I told him briefly the story of my cousin. He didn't said nothing in response and just returned to his site. After that I realized that he was with another guy, who had a skateboard. The bus continued its route. My stop was the last one, theirs too.
We went out of the bus at the same time, so, the guy who has talked to me do it again. He asked me if I live in that neighborhood. I did, and the three of us became friends instantly. They spent that whole day at my house. We skated almost everyday for two years.

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I started alone, but I getmade friends very soonquickly.

A cousin of mine gave me a board.

He was already a skater, but I lived very far from both his house and the center of the city, where the best skate'sing spots were.

As you can imagine, I learned the basics very soon, and I started to use it.

One day, I was on a bus and a weird guy, with a strange way of taking, addressed me, h. He wanted to see my skateboard.

I haven't said it, but my board's grip tape had a animal print on it.

The guy asked me where I haved bought that grip tape.

He didn't said noy anything in response and just returned to his sitplace.

We went out of the bus at the same time, so, the guy who hasd talked to me before dido it again.

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What a nice memory! Great entry :)

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basiliomagno

Aug. 5, 2021

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Thank you!! :)

I told him briefly the story of my cousin.


He didn't said nothing in response and just returned to his site.


He didn't said noy anything in response and just returned to his sitplace.

A Skateboarding Story


Now, skateboarding is at the Olympics.


I just saw the park competition, it was amazing and reminded me of the times when I practiced skateboarding.


I started alone, but I get friends very soon.


I started alone, but I getmade friends very soonquickly.

A cousin of mine gave me a board.


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He was already a skater, but I lived very far from both his house and the center of the city, where the best skate's spots were.


He was already a skater, but I lived very far from both his house and the center of the city, where the best skate'sing spots were.

That skateboard became an essential for me, I carried it with me all the time.


As you can image, I learned the basics very soon, and I started to use it.


As you can imagine, I learned the basics very soon, and I started to use it.

One day, I was on a bus and a weird guy, with a strange way of taking, addressed me, he wanted to see my skateboard.


One day, I was on a bus and a weird guy, with a strange way of taking, addressed me, h. He wanted to see my skateboard.

I haven't said it, but my board's grip tape had a animal print on it.


I haven't said it, but my board's grip tape had a animal print on it.

It looked very cool.


The guy asked me where I have bought that grip tape.


The guy asked me where I haved bought that grip tape.

After that I realized that he was with another guy, who had a skateboard.


The bus continued its route.


My stop was the last one, theirs too.


We went out of the bus at the same time, so, the guy who has talked to me do it again.


We went out of the bus at the same time, so, the guy who hasd talked to me before dido it again.

He asked me if I live in that neighborhood.


I did, and the three of us became friends instantly.


They spent that whole day at my house.


We skated almost everyday for two years.


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