At dusk, it wasn't very hot.

Sso I decided to go for a ride.

This is the same thought and can be put in one sentence.

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby.

You don't need to twice.

I went to visited them in April.

It cost metook a half an hour one way to get there.

Usually cost only refers to money.

The majorin road is being rebuilding.t

So it is very unconveinient. to travel there.

Can be made into one sentence, remove period beforehand and replace with lowercase s.

When I was riding, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down.

When using "but", you do not need a comma. Only use a comma when you are not using a transition word.

I had to ride towards the roadbed which is made of earthside of the road.

The statement doesn't seem to make much sense, I suggest this instead

AndThe side of the roadbed is about 5 cms lower than the road.

So I dumstopped for a while.

I hated the rude driver.

Past tense uses "ed"

The other just finished picking up longan.

What is longan?

I ate a lot of logan and wampee.

Unsure what Logan and wampee means

We chatted a lot.

Past tense :)

And thenfter I had lunch with them.

"And" is a transition statement and isn't used at the beginning of a sentence, or new statement.

AMy aunt invited me for another visit soon, anshe said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

When I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs which she justthat she picked from the farm.

Past tense - left, leaved is not a word.

ButSince the road is dumpyrough, the eggs willould be broken.

Dumpy isn't a word, we usually say "rough" - not flat, bumpy or uneven. Period can be removed

Sso I refused.

But I took the longan and wampee awaywith me.

No but here

ItThe country road is longer than the majorin one, but there are fewer cars.

Restate the object if you are starting a new sentence

TWhen the sun has gonewent down, the clouds wasere pink.

There are hills far away, they are so green.

The breeze was blowing.

No period here, continuing the thought.

Aand birds were flying.

I felt peaceful and very happy that I made athe right decision to go foron the trip.

I love the nature, it can always makes me feel peaceful inside.

And I need to go out more to have a goodimprove my mood.

New sentence, don't need "and".

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby.

I had visited them in April.

It costtook me half an hour one wayto get there.

The major road is rebuildingy are rebuilding a major road.

So it is very uinconvienient.

Whilen I was riding, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down.

I had to ride towards the roadbed which is made of earthedge of the road which was full of dirt and gravel.

And the roadbed iedge of the road was about 5 cms lower than the road.

So I dumstopped? for a while.

Do you mean you stopped for a while?

I hated theat rude driver.

When I arrived, one aunt wasn't at home.

The other had just finished picking longan.

I ate a lot of longan and wampee.

We chatted a lot.

AMy aunt invited me for another visit soon, andwhen she willplans to cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

When I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs which she just picked from the farm.

But the road is dbumpy, and the eggs will be brokenmay break along the way.

But I took thsome longan and wampee away.

The sun hasd gone down, and the cloud wasere pink.

There are hills far away, they are so green.

I felt at peace, and very happy that I made athe right decision to go for the trip.

I love the nature, it can always makes me feel peaceful inside.

And I need to go out more to havebe in a good mood.

At dusk, iIt wasn't very hot at dusk.

I wanted to go to visit two aunts who live nearby.

It costtook me half an hour one way.

The major road is being rebuildingt.

So it is very uinconvienient.

Whilen I was dridving, a car passed by, but it didn't slow down.

Or if you were riding a bike: "While I was riding my bike,..."

I had to ridepull over towards the roadbed which is made of earth.

(You could also say it was made of "gravel" or "dirt")

And the roadbed is about 5 cms lower than the road.

So I dumped for a whilestayed put for a little while (until it was safe to continue my drive).

(I wrote this because I assume you pulled aside and waited for the rude driver to pass before continuing your commute.)

I hated theat rude driver.

When I arrived, I found out that one aunt wasn't at home.

Your sentence was alright, but I added "I found out that" to connect the two parts a little more.

The other had just finished picking longan.

I ate a lot of longan and wampee.

We chatted a lot.

Auntie invited me for another visit soon, and said she will cook eggs for me because she knows I like eggs.

In English we often say "auntie" informally as a title (Auntie Pam), and "aunt" when we refer to someone (my aunt).

WhenBefore I leaveft, she asked me to take some eggs whichhome that she just picked up from the farm.

We often say "pick" with fruit/vegetables from a plant or tree (I picked some apples). But with eggs, it's better to say someone just "picked them up."

But because the road is dbumpy, I knew the eggs will be brokenould probably break.

So I refused to take the eggs.

But I took the longan and wampee awaywith me.

The sun hasd gone down, the clouds wasere pink.

There are hill far away,s in the distance theyat are so green.

I felt peace and very happy that I made a rightthe decision to go for the trip.

(I removed "peaceful" because the next sentence also uses the word peace)

Also, I love the nature, it can because it always makes me feel peaceful inside.

And I need to go out more to have a goodimprove my mood.