She is living in Wuxi now and sometimes she will goes back to her hometown to visit her relatives.

She has two eolderly brothers and they love her so much.

'elderly' suggests that they are old ( in their 60+), if they are then 'elderly' could work'

She likes chatting, traveling and she used to be athe manager of a WeChat group of 500 members.

'a' works if there were multiple other managers as well.

The deep impression she left on me was that she posted many beautiful pictures of her home village, which she was in a mountainous area, so I had a chance to see those wild animals and birds.

sentence is grammatically correct but I don't think '' deep impression'' was used correctly. The impression someone leaves on you is more of what you think about them or how they make you feel such as whether they are nice or kind.

As far as I know, 'the little cat's' hometown is in the Gushi County, located in Xinyang cCity, of Henan Province.

The single quotation punctuation (') is very important to indicate it has another meaning which in this case is a person's username instead of the literal meaning.

But she was born and raised in Wuxi, of Jiangsu Province.

She also finished her schooling years in Wuxi.

She isNow, she still livinges in Wuxi now and sometimes she will go back to her hometown to visit her relatives.

She has many relatives, andwho most of themly live in her hometown while some of othemrs live aroundin different parts of China.

She is now athe boss running a chain of a milk tea chain.

Also "She now runs a milk tea chain."

She has two eolderly brothers and theywho love her sovery much.

'Elderly' refers to old people, over 70 years old.

She likes chatting, travelling and she used to be a managern admin of a WeChat group consisting of 500 members.

She is an outgoing girl with bravery and blunder charactersand courageous girl but her character is rather blunt.

She is also a funny girl andas she likes to make a lot of jokes.

The deep impressiobeautiful pictures in sthe left on me was that she posted many beautiful pictures of her home village, which was in a mountainous area, so I had a chance to seemountainous area of her home village that she posted left me in awe as I got to know about those wild animals and birds there.

Some guys mayhave asked me, "How do you know a lot of things about her?"

Using 'may' implies that it's a possibility. If that's what you're trying to say, then you can use "people may ...".

Because she is half my fellow-villagour villages are directly across each other,.

There is only athe Huai River betweenthat seperates our hometown and we have almost the same dialect.

To know more about her, please stay tuned please.

A Short PieceStory in English

As far as I know, the little cat's hometown is in Gushi County, Xinyang city, Henan ProvinceXinyang which is in Gushi County in the province of Henan.

She also finished her schooling years in Wuxi.

She is livinglives in Wuxi now and sometimes she will goes back to her hometown to visit her relatives.

She has many relatives, and most of them who mostly live in her hometown while some of but othemrs live aroundin different parts China.

She is now athe boss runningof a chain of milk tea businesses.

She has two elderly brothers and theythat love her sovery much.

She likes to chatting, traveling and she used to be a manager of a WeChat group of 500 members.

She is an outgoing girl with bravery and blunder charactcharacterized by braversy.

I'm not sure what you mean by blunder

The deep impression she left on me waWhat struck me about her is that she posted many beautiful pictures of her home village, which was in a mountainous area, soand I had a chance to see those wild animals and birds there.

Some guysone may ask me, "How do you know a lot of thingsso much about her?"

Because she is halfmost my fellow-villager,

There is only athe Huai River betweenthat separates our hometown and we have almost the same dialect.