May 23, 2020
A secret of the snakes revealed
Today, while doing my French exercise, I have learned something interesting and it's worth to share.
Maybe you know that snakes, just like chicken, hatch from eggs and that all snake babies in a nest hatch simultaneously. If there is a predator close to the nest, then some of the snake babies will be eaten, but by hatching simultaneously, at least a few of them will survive.
While this doesn't sound too exciting, one should ask how they can achieve that. Imagine giving a job to a few dozen people in your company and asking them to finish it at exactly the same time. Even though we have an advanced language and modern communication technology, it will never work. The snakes are, however, isolated in their egg shells.
The answer to the question is that they are capable of synchronizing their heartbeats while they are still in the eggs. Like this, they develop exactly in the same speed and will consequently be ready for hatching at the same time. This shows how highly snakes are developed, even if seemingly they consist only of a head and a tail, with everything else omitted.
Maybe you want to know where I got such an interesting language textbook. I enjoy listening to a science podcast by RFI. I highly recommend it if you study French.
A secret of the snakes revealed
Today, while doing my French exercise, I have learned something interesting and it's worth to shareing.
Maybe you know that snakes, just like chicken, hatch from eggs and that all snake babies in a nest hatch simultaneously.
If there is a predator close to the nest, then some of the snake babies will be eaten, but by hatching simultaneously, at least a few of them will survive.
While this doesn't sound too exciting, one should ask how they can achieve that.
Imagine giving a job to a few dozen people in your company and asking them to finish it at exactly the same time.
Even though we have an advanced language and modern communication technology, it willould never work.
The snakes are, however, isolated in their egg shells.
The answer to the question is that they are capable of synchronizing their heartbeats while they are still in the eggs.
Like this, they develop at exactly in the same speed and will consequently be ready for hatching at the same time.
This shows how highly developed snakes are developed, even if seemingly they consist only of a head and a tail, with everything else omitted.
If you write "...snakes are developed," the phrase "are developed can seem like a past tense verb. By moving the word "developed" earlier, you can make sure the reader interprets "developed" as a state, not an action.
Maybe you want to know where I got such an interesting language textbook.
I enjoy listening to a science podcast by RFI.
I highly recommend it if you study French.
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So cool! I learned something new about snakes today :)
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Maybe you know that snakes, just like chickens, hatch from eggs and that all snakthe babies in a nest hatch simultaneously.
If there is a predator close to the nest, then some of the snake babibaby snakes will be eaten, but by hatching simultaneously, at least a few of them will survive.
While this doesn't sound too exciting, one should ask how they can achieve thado it.
Even though we have an advanc sophisticated language and modern communication technology, it willould never workhappen.
The snakes are, however, are isolated in their egg shells.
The answer to the question is that they are capable of synchronizing their heartbeats while they are still in the eggs.
Like this,This means they develop at exactly in the same speed and will consequently be ready forto hatching at the same time.
This shows how highly developed snakes are developed, even if they seemingly they consist only of a head and a tail, with everything else omitted.
The last phrase of your sentence isn't wrong, but I think it is unnecessary.
Actually, I don't use a textbook. I enjoy listening to a science podcast by RFI.
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Nice job. That's interesting!
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