Sept. 25, 2023
A school story part two
When I finished school I had no idea what I would do in my life. My best friend Eugene advised me to take a gap year. I laughed when he said that. I didn’t understand for what I should have to take a gap year. In my humble opinion, nobody needs to take a gap year. I decided to go for a work while I was looking for a college. I became an parking assistant. It wasn't a difficult job, but I had a very low salary. Honestly, I don’t need a lot of money. I can meintain myself by $100 a week. Also, I signed up for an evening classes in the worst college in the world. When I saw a timetable there I was really shocked. There were only 5 classes in a week and no extra-curricular activities! Fortunately It was a coeducational college. There was a lot beautiful girls. I met Marla here. As far as she is concerned, Marla is the most literate person I’ve ever met. She knows more than 4 languages. It’s amazing! She always says: “ Literacy is the most important thing in the world”. She learnt very well at college and nobody couldn’t keep up with her. She had never been skipping classes for 5 years. Of course, I loved her. Her parents are very reach people. She was sent to a private boarding school when she was 7. She never study at comprehensive school.
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Fortunately It was a coeducational college.
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A school story part two |
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When I finished school I had no idea what I would do in my life. When I finished school I had no idea what I would do with my life sounds better When I finished school, I had no idea what I would do |
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My best friend Eugene advised me to take a gap year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I laughed when he said that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn’t understand for what I should have to take a gap year. I didn’t understand I didn’t understand |
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In my humble opinion, nobody needs to take a gap year. |
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I decided to go for a work while I was looking for a college. I decided to go |
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I became an parking assistant. I |
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It wasn't a difficult job, but I had a very low salary. It wasn't a difficult job, but I |
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Honestly, I don’t need a lot of money. |
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I can meintain myself by $100 a week. I can it’s spelled maintain but this phrasing is more appropriate I can maintain used more in English for an object |
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Also, I signed up for an evening classes in the worst college in the world.
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When I saw a timetable there I was really shocked. When I saw Do you mean to say that your individual schedule was surprising? I assume you meant the offerings of the college generally |
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There were only 5 classes in a week and no extra-curricular activities! |
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Fortunately It was a coeducational college. Fortunately It was a coed In the US we don’t usually spell out coeducational, just coed is more common. |
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There was a lot beautiful girls. There w |
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I met Marla here. I met Marla there. |
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As far as she is concerned, Marla is the most literate person I’ve ever met. As far as |
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She knows more than 4 languages. |
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It’s amazing! |
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She always says: “ Literacy is the most important thing in the world”. |
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She learnt very well at college and nobody couldn’t keep up with her. She She |
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She had never been skipping classes for 5 years.
She had never |
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Of course, I loved her. |
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Her parents are very reach people. Her parents are very r did you mean wealthy or approachable? Her parents are very r Rich not reach. To reach is a verb |
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She was sent to a private boarding school when she was 7. |
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She never study at comprehensive school. She never I think this is what you mean? She never stud |
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