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July 10, 2021

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A Ride

I went riding a bike at dusk today. It was hot, so I wear shorts and sandals. I put on blue earphones to listen music.
There were a few people who were going for a walk at the beginning, I passed by quickly. Then there was nobody walking. The sun was going down, the light is warm and golden, it made me feel comfortable. I stopped and took a picture. There was another guy who was riding.
I kept riding. I met a piece of rice fild. The rice is yellow and put its head down. It is near the harvest time. I happened to hear the song <Tsing River>(《清河》) from the earphones. The song is about the dusk of the Tsing River. What a wonderful coincidence! I stopped and took a lot of photos of the rice fild because it is very beautiful.
I started again. The song <Apple of My Eye> flew in my ear. The scene is the apple of my eye. I usually rode a bike here last year when I was free.

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A Ride

I went ridingon a bike ride at dusk today.

It was hot, so I wearore shorts and sandals.

I put on blue earphones to listen music.

There were a few people who were going for a walk at the beginning, I passed by quickly.

Then there was nobody walking.

The sun was going down, the light is warm and golden, it made me feel comfortable.

I stopped and took a picture.

There was another guy who was riding.

I kept riding.

I met a piece ofcame upon a rice field.

The rice iwas yellow and put its head down.drooping.

It is near the harvest time.

I happened to hear the song <"Tsing River>"(《清河》) from themy earphones.

The song is about the dusk ofat the Tsing River.

What a wonderful coincidence!

I stopped and took a lot of photos of the rice field because it iwas very beautiful.

I started again.

The song <"Apple of My Eye> flew" played in my ear.

The scene iwas the apple of my eye.

I usually rode a bikefrequently went on bike rides here last year when I was frehad time.

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I kept riding.


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Then there was nobody walking.


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A Ride


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I went riding a bike at dusk today.


I went ridingon a bike ride at dusk today.

It was hot, so I wear shorts and sandals.


It was hot, so I wearore shorts and sandals.

I put on blue earphones to listen music.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were a few people who were going for a walk at the beginning, I passed by quickly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sun was going down, the light is warm and golden, it made me feel comfortable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I stopped and took a picture.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There was another guy who was riding.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I met a piece of rice fild.


I met a piece ofcame upon a rice field.

The rice is yellow and put its head down.


The rice iwas yellow and put its head down.drooping.

It is near the harvest time.


It is near the harvest time.

I happened to hear the song <Tsing River>(《清河》) from the earphones.


I happened to hear the song <"Tsing River>"(《清河》) from themy earphones.

The song is about the dusk of the Tsing River.


The song is about the dusk ofat the Tsing River.

What a wonderful coincidence!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I stopped and took a lot of photos of the rice fild because it is very beautiful.


I stopped and took a lot of photos of the rice field because it iwas very beautiful.

I started again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The song <Apple of My Eye> flew in my ear.


The song <"Apple of My Eye> flew" played in my ear.

The scene is the apple of my eye.


The scene iwas the apple of my eye.

I usually rode a bike here last year when I was free.


I usually rode a bikefrequently went on bike rides here last year when I was frehad time.

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