May 21, 2022
There is a shopping center near my town called Puerto Venecia. The main difference with others malls is that it has a lot of open spaces, as an example, almost all restaurants are outside and have a terrace.
The variety of services is other of its strong points. Besides cloth and home stuff shops you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake.
Even it's a really big shopping center, it's not outskirts and you can get there by bus or bike. Although many people prefer to drive in, I recommend you avoid it unless you really need to load something big or heavy, specially on the weekends. It also has a direct access by motorway used by many visitors coming from near villages and towns.
I recommend visiting Puerto Venecia to have a good time because you can find any thing to do whatever your age or interests is. Even if you aren't into shopping centers at al, Puerto Venecia was built among a pine forest, so you could go hikin or ride your MTB in its sourroundings.
A review: Puerto Venecia shopping center
There is a shopping center near my town called Puerto Venecia.
The main difference withcompared to others malls is that it has a lot of open spaces, a. As an example, almost all restaurants are outside and have a terrace.
It wasn't very clear that you were comparing this mall with other malls, so it's better to say "compared to"
The variety of services is another of its strong points.
Besides clothes and home stuff shops, you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake.
Even though it's a really big shopping center, it's not on the outskirts and you can get there by bus or bike.
Although many people prefer to drive in, I recommend you avoid it unless you really need to load something big or heavy, especially on the weekends.
It also has a direct access byvia the motorway used by many visitors coming from near villages and towns.
I recommend visiting Puerto Venecia to have a good time because you can find any thing to do, whatever your age or interests is.
Even if you aren't into shopping centers at al, Puerto Venecia was built among a pine forest, so you could go hiking or ride your MTB in its sourroundings.
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Really good work! It sounds like a nice shopping centre :)
A review: Puerto Venecia shopping center
There is a shopping center near my town called Puerto Venecia.
The main difference withcompared to others malls is that it has a lot of open spaces, as anfor example, almost all restaurants are outside and have a terrace.
The variety of services is another (one) of its strong points.
Besides clothes and home stuff shops, you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake.
I presume you mean clothes shops by saying "cloth"
Even though it's a really big shopping centere, it's not on the outskirts and you can get there by bus or bike.
Although many people prefer to drive in, I recommend you avoid it unless you really need to load something big or heavy, specially on the weekends.
It also has a direct access by motorway, which is used by many visitors coming from nearby villages and towns.
I recommend visiting Puerto Venecia to have a good time because you can find any thing to do whatever your age or interests is.
Even if you aren't into shopping centeres at all, Puerto Venecia was built among a pine forest, so you could go hiking or ride your MTB in its sourroundings.
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Good writing! This sounds like an amazing shopping centre, I really want to visit it now :)
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There is a shopping center near my town called Puerto Venecia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The variety of services is other of its strong points. The variety of services is another (one) of its strong points. The variety of services is another of its strong points. |
Besides cloth and home stuff shops you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake. Besides clothes and home stuff shops, you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake. I presume you mean clothes shops by saying "cloth" Besides clothes and home |
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