Well, lLet me tell you a commonly heard ghost story named “gGhost bs Building wWalls”(鬼打墙guǐdǎqiáng).

'Well' in this sense is more commonly used in spoken language.

WeAs kids, we often heard from others that one night, a guy was returning to his village from another village.

'We kids' suggests you are still a kid now. 'Guy' is correct but more colloquial. If you want to be more formal, you can say 'a man' :)

When he was in a field near his village in the field, somehow he couldn’t get home by any means.

It seemed like his bramind was clear, and he knew the way home, y. Yet, no matter how long he walked, he just walked around in the same placecircles.

People believed that ghosts built a wall circlecircular wall for him, so he couldn’t get out of the wall.

You could also say 'so he couldn't escape'

MaybeIt wasn't until the next morning that the sun rose, orsun rose the next morning and he suddenly heard dogs barking, that the ghost wall would loselost its magic thatand the guy could get back to normal.

Haha, I just heard this story from othersome older kids than me, and I didn’t know who they heard it from.

However, I have never met a person who has experienced such things themselves.

Well, let me tell you a commonly hepopulard ghost story namcalled “ghost building walls” (鬼打墙 guǐdǎqiáng).

WeAs kids, we often heard from others thata story about a man who, one night, a guy was returning to his village from another village.

When he was nearAs he approached his village inthrough the field, somehow he couldn’'t get home by any meansfind his way home for some reason.

The original sentence wasn't grammatically incorrect but sounded a bit unnatural. "For some reason" was moved to the end for better flow.

It seemed likeAlthough his bramind was clear, and he knew the way home, yet no matter how long he walked, he just walked aroundhe found himself walking in circles, always ending up in the same place.

"Brain" refers to the physical body organ, whereas "mind" refers to the collection of someone's thoughts, memories, etc.

People believed that ghosts had built a wall circle for him, so he couldn’t get out of the walln invisible wall around him, preventing him from leaving that spot.

You can also use "erected" instead of "built." "Prevent" explains the wall's effects better.

Maybe until the next morning that the sun rosePerhaps it was only when the sun rose the next morning, or whe suddenlyn he heard dogs barking, that the ghost wall would lose magic that the guy could get back to's magic dissipated and he could proceed normally.

Verb tense consistency + rephrasing of words for clarity

Haha, I justonly heard this story from otherkids older kids than me, and I didn’t know who they heard'm not sure where they got it from.

Just heard = someone told you the story right before you wrote this piece.

I ha've never ever believed in ghosts.

"have never ever" is a bit redundant

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