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Jack

July 24, 2023

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I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods in my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself. Back then, I was just a child, so I didn't know how to cook. Maybe, my mother sometimes cooked the cicadas.

Your second question is true. My mother told me about that. She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see. I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.

I go back to my home village twice a year. The first time is at the Qingming Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival to memorialize the dead.

The second time is before Chinese New Year, on the twenty ninth or thirtieth of lunar December. I did the same thing as I did at the Qingming festival, to show my respect to my ancestors.

Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles), my siblings and I have left the village since our youth.

My two older brothers live in Shanghai. My younger sister lives in Hangzhou and I live in Fuyang.

I only know people who were around while I was growing up to fifteen in the village. When I turned fifteen years old, I went to the city I live in now to study. Since then, I have been living outside the village.

Thank you for your questions. They gave me the motivation to write in English. Thank you.

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In the back woods in my village, I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods in my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself.

Back then, I was just a child, so I didn't know how to cook.

Maybe, my mother sometimes cooked the cicadas.

Your second question is true.correct.

My mother told me about that.

She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.

I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.

I go back to my home village twice a year.

The first time is atduring the Qingming Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival to commemorializate / celebrate the dead.

The second time is before Chinese New Year, on the twenty ninth or thirtieth of lunar day in December.

Not sure if lunar day of December is correct as I thought Chinese New Year is normally in February.

I dido the same thing as I dido at the Qingming festival, to show my respect to my ancestors.

Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles), m. My siblings and I have left the village since our youth.

My two older brothers live in Shanghai.

My younger sister lives in Hangzhou and I live in Fuyang.

I only know people who were around while I was growing up to age fifteen in the village.

When I turned fifteen years old, I went to the city I live in now towhere I now live and study.

Since then, I have been living outside the village.

Thank you for your questions.

They gave me the motivation to write in English.

Thank you.

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Jack

July 26, 2023

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The second time is before Chinese New Year, on the twenty ninth or thirtieth of lunar day in December.

Yes.

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Jack

July 26, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods inof my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself.

She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.

I'm confused what "spot scene" is.

I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.

Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles),; my siblings and I have left the village since our youth.

I only know people who were around while I was growing up to fifteen in the village.

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Jack

July 25, 2023

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She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.

The scene of people eating corpses because of hunger.

Jack's avatar
Jack

July 25, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods in my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself.


I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods inof my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself.

In the back woods in my village, I think I caught baby cicadas a few times with some villagers in the back woods in my village at nights, but I don't think I cooked the cicadas myself.

Back then, I was just a child, so I didn't know how to cook.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe, my mother sometimes cooked the cicadas.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your second question is true.


Your second question is true.correct.

My mother told me about that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.


She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.

I'm confused what "spot scene" is.

She told me about the specific people who did that and the spot scene she happened to see.

I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.


I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.

I try hard to avoid using the specific words because they sound really horrible.

I go back to my home village twice a year.


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The first time is at the Qingming Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival to memorialize the dead.


The first time is atduring the Qingming Festival, which is a traditional Chinese festival to commemorializate / celebrate the dead.

The second time is before Chinese New Year, on the twenty ninth or thirtieth of lunar December.


The second time is before Chinese New Year, on the twenty ninth or thirtieth of lunar day in December.

Not sure if lunar day of December is correct as I thought Chinese New Year is normally in February.

I did the same thing as I did at the Qingming festival, to show my respect to my ancestors.


I dido the same thing as I dido at the Qingming festival, to show my respect to my ancestors.

Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles), my siblings and I have left the village since our youth.


Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles),; my siblings and I have left the village since our youth.

Now, only my cousins live in the village (the children of my uncles), m. My siblings and I have left the village since our youth.

My two older brothers live in Shanghai.


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My younger sister lives in Hangzhou and I live in Fuyang.


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I only know people who were around while I was growing up to fifteen in the village.


I only know people who were around while I was growing up to fifteen in the village.

I only know people who were around while I was growing up to age fifteen in the village.

When I turned fifteen years old, I went to the city I live in now to study.


When I turned fifteen years old, I went to the city I live in now towhere I now live and study.

Since then, I have been living outside the village.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for your questions.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They gave me the motivation to write in English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you.


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