July 23, 2023
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The cicadas' shells are used in Chinese medicine. When the shells are used in Chinese medicine, people don't eat them. People just put the shell in water, boil the water and drink the water when the water cools down. Baby cicadas can be eaten, but it is not a common food and is very expensive. People don't eat it raw, they only eat it after it is fried. I have eaten it several times. I like its taste.
Yes, it was called 人民公社.
The famine you mentioned was called 三年自然灾害, from 1959 to 1961. My mother told me that half of the villagers in my village died from hunger.
I learned from my mother that the famine was not caused by low farm production. It was because the lower level officials exaggerated farm production, so they had to transfer almost all grains to the above government. Therefore, many farmers died from the food shortage.
When I was a child, no one died from hunger again, although we didn't have enough food to eat. Anyway, the villagers did have food to eat, just not enough.
Children caught cicadas just for fun. It doesn't matter how many cicadas they caught. Normally, I could catch ten to twenty cicadas a day.
When I was a child, most children went to elementary school, and a few of them went to middle school. Fewer middle school students who performed very well in their academic grades went to a specialized secondary school. Compared with today, children didn't receive a good education.
Nowadays, only old people and children live in the countryside. Most young and middle aged people work in cities to make money. Indeed, some houses are abandoned because part of the villagers have bought apartments in cities.
No problem, feel free to ask me about things that occurred in the countryside.
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The cicadas' shells are used in Chinese medicine.
When the shellsy are used in Chinese medicinefor medicinal purposes, people don't eat them.
People just put the shells in water, and boil the water andm, drinking the water when the water cools downcool.
Baby cicadas can be eaten, but it is not a common food and is very expensive.
People don't eat ithem raw, they only eat it after it isonly fried.
I have eaten ithem several times.
I like itstheir taste.
Yes, it was called 人民公社.
The famine you mentioned was called 三年自然灾害, from 1959 to 1961.
My mother told me that half of the villagersose in my village died from hunger.
I learned from my mother that the famine was not caused by low farm production.
It was because the lower level officials exaggerated farmagricultural production, numbers; so, they had to transfer almost all the grains to the above higher levels of government.
Therefore, many farmers died from the food shortage.
When I was a child, no one died from hunger again, although we didn't have enough food to eat.
Anyway, the villagers did have food to eat, just not enough.
Children caught cicadas just for fun.
It doesidn't matter how many cicadas they caught.
Normally, I could catch ten to twenty cicadas a day.
When I was a child, most children went to elementary school, and a few of them went to middle school.
FewerThere were a few middle school students who performed very well in their academic gradesacademically; therefore, they went to a specialized secondary school.
Compared with today, children didn't receive a good education.
Nowadays, only old people and children live in the countryside.
Most young and middle aged people work in cities to make money.
Indeed, some houses are abandoned because part of the villagerin the country because their inhabitants have bought apartments in cities.
No problem, feel free to ask me about things that occurred in the countryside.
This is a grammatically correct sentence; however, it doesn't make sense without context.
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Great job! Just a few corrections!
July 24, 2023
Thank you very much.
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The cicadas' shells are used in Chinese medicine.
When the shells are used in Chinese medicine, people don't eat them.
People just put the shell in the water, boil the water and drink the water when the water cools down.
Baby cicadas can be eaten, but it is not a common food and is very expensive.
People don't eat ithem raw, they only eat ithem after it isthey are fried.
Following on from Baby cicadas in the last sentence.
I have eaten ithem several times.
I like itsthe taste.
Yes, it was called 人民公社.
The famine you mentioned was called 三年自然灾害, from 1959 to 1961.
My mother told me that half of the villagerspopulation in my village died ofrom hunger.
I learned from my mother that the famine was not caused by low farm production.
It was because the lower level officials exaggerated farm production, so they had to transfer almost all the grains to the above government.
Therefore, many farmers died from the food shortage.
When I was a child, no one died from hunger again, although we didn't have enough food to eat.
Anyway, the villagers did have food to eat, just not enough.
Children caught cicadas just for fun.
It doesn't matter how many cicadas they caught.
Normally, I could catch ten to twenty cicadas a day.
When I was a child, most children went to elementary school, and a few of them went to middle school.
FewerA few middle school students who performed very well in their academic grades went to a specialized secondary school.
Fewer is a comparative. To say a small number you can say "a few".
Compared with today, children didn't receive a good education.
Nowadays, only old people and children live in the countryside.
Most young and middle aged people work in cities to make money.
Indeed, some houses are abandoned because partsome of the villagers have bought apartments in the cities.
No problem, f. Feel free to ask me about things that occurred in the countryside.
Feedback
Good.
Correcting the language when someone is talking about a tragic event i.e. a famine is a strange feeling.
July 24, 2023
Thank you very much.
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People just put the shell in water, boil the water and drink the water when the water cools down. People just put the shell in the water, boil the water and drink the water when the water cools down. People just put the shells in water |
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It was because the lower level officials exaggerated farm production, so they had to transfer almost all grains to the above government. It was because the lower level officials exaggerated farm production, so they had to transfer almost all the grain It was because |
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When I was a child, no one died from hunger again, although we didn't have enough food to eat. When I was a child, no one died from hunger When I was a child, no one died from hunger |
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Children caught cicadas just for fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Normally, I could catch ten to twenty cicadas a day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was a child, most children went to elementary school, and a few of them went to middle school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fewer middle school students who performed very well in their academic grades went to a specialized secondary school.
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