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Tammy

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There was another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.

I use Jianying APP to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it has already paid copyright fees. But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video. When YouTube found the music problem, it would offer some replaceable options. It's nice and thoughtful, but it's difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.

Also. If you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos. Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them. I wanted to share these delightful feelings, but there was always someone pressing the "dislike" button. Sometimes it made me doubt my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.

But still, emotions always don't follow reasons.


在上传新视频到YouTube时,又出现了一个音乐问题。

我用剪映APP给我的视频添加音乐,因为它提供了很多已经支付版权费的免费音乐。但有时,这些不包括YouTube上的版权。

这真的很烦人,因为每次我会选择符合我在视频中的感受的音乐。当YouTube发现音乐问题时,它会提供一些可替代的选项。这很棒,也很周到,但很难找到符合我感觉的替代品。

我发现YouTube上有一些免费的音乐,我们也可以下载。

我下载了一些符合我感觉的,并决定在上传视频到YouTube之前用它们来代替我的原始音乐。

然后音乐问题就解决了,尽管我在YouTube上的视频会只有那么几个音乐选择。

哦对了,如果你在https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c上看了我的视频且喜欢它,你能帮我点个赞吗?

我喜欢我的视频。每次看到它们,我都感觉回到了拍摄它们的彼时彼处。我想分享这些愉快的感觉,但总有人按下“不喜欢”键。有时这让我怀疑自己分享的举动,尤其是当我累了的时候。

我知道,就像我们的电子商务行业一样,人们往往不会在有正面评价的时候发表意见,而是在有负面评价的时候提出意见。

但是,情绪总是不跟着道理走呀。

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ALSO POSSIBLE: A Problem Resolved Problem

There was another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.

I used the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music, for which it has already paid copyright fees.

But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTubeOPTION A: However, some of the music is not covered by YouTube's copyright rules.¶
OPTION B: However, YouTube's copyright rules do not cover some of the audio content
.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video.

MY GUESS: When YouTube found the music problem, itpointed out the copyright problem, I was hoping they would offer some replaceable opalternative solutions.

It'sYouTube's suggested sources were nice and thoughtful, but it' was difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.

Also.,

NOTE: Change the period (.) to a comma (,) ....

Iif you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos.

Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them.

Sometimes it made me doubt my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.

But still, emotions always don't follow reasons.

Feedback

Basically, it was nice. Over time, you might want to learn how to mix audio sounds on a freeware program such as Audacity (https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Audacity) . I also have a lot to learn about videos. We are all on a learning journey. Thanks for sharing!

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Tammy

today

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谢谢您!

Mixing audio sounds feels quite different to me, haha!

A Resolved Problem

There was / I encountered / I had / I ran into another music problem when (or: while) uploading a new video to YouTube.

We tend to prefer active voice (“I did something”) instead of passive (“there was something”) in English.

I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which {it has | they have} already paid the copyright fees.

In English, “app” isn’t capitalized. It’s short for “application” (as in “computer application” (software program)).

But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video., when YouTube found…

I think this works better when combined with the next sentence.

W…when YouTube found a (copyright) problem with the music problem, it would {offer some replaceablement options | suggest some replacements}.

It's nice and thoughtful, but it's difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.

Also.:

If you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos.

Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them.

I wanted to share these delightful feelings, but there was always someone pressing the "dislike" button.

Sometimes it made me doubt / question my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.

suggestion: “…people tend to keep their positive opinions to themselves, but are more vocal about their negative opinions.”

But still, emotions always don'tnever follow reasons.

We say “never” instead of “always don’t,” but I wonder if maybe “don’t always” might be closer to what you want to say: emotions don’t always follow reason.

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JoeTofu

yesterday

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I like your video, but I usually watch YouTube videos in the DuckDuckGo player, not in the YouTube app, because I don’t like the way YouTube tracks which videos I watch. However, I will make an exception this time and log into YouTube so that I can “like” this video. :-)

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Tammy

today

2

谢谢!

DuckDuckGo player sounds great!

I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it has already paid copyright feesthe copyright fees have been paid.

Instead of I use, it should be I used: past tense

When YouTube found out about the music problem, it would offered some replaceable options.

Saying it would offer makes it seem like it didn't happen, it offered would be better

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joshuedev

yesterday

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This is very good, keep grinding, hope I was able to provide helpful suggestions

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Tammy

yesterday

2

Thank you so much! Grinding is a new word for me. I just added it to my vocabulary notebook.

Have a nice day!

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There wasI had another music problem whenile I was uploading a new video to YouTube.

I use Jianying APP to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it hasthey've already paid copyright fees.

But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.

It was really annoying because everyach time, I had chose then music that matched my feelings in the video.

"Every time" implies that there will be another clause, similarly to what you've done below. I've used a comma to make this sentence read a little better, and I've re-worded it to sound just a little more natural.

Whenever YouTube found thea music problem, it would offer some replaceablement options.

"Replaceable options" implies that the options themselves can be replaced, which doesn't really make sense.

It' was nice and thoughtful, but it' was difficult to find an alternative that matchesd my feelings.

I'm pretty sure this should be in past tense.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.

Also.,

If you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos.

Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them.

I wanted to share these delightful feelings, but there was always someone pressing the "dislike" button.

Sometimes it made me doubt my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when therey are positive evaluations, but to offer them when therey are negative ones.

Alternatively: "...people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive things to say, but offer them when there are negative things."

"Evaluation" is a very fancy word. To me, an "evaluation" is purely for business, or maybe education. Wikipedia describes it as "a systematic determination and assessment of a subject's merit, worth and significance". Basically: a very serious and professional review.

But still, emotions don't always don't follow reasons.

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Overall, very well written! Hope I could help, and keep up the good work!

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Tammy

yesterday

2

Thank you so much! You are definitely helpful! I learned a lot from your feedback and corrections.

Have a nice day!

There wasI had another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.

"There was" is perfectly fine here, but it's often good to be less passive when opening a story. Saying "I had" puts you as a character in the story from the beginning.

I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it hassince they've already paid the copyright fees.

Don't forget to add the "the" before a noun (like "app"). Also, there's nothing grammatically wrong with the end of the sentence, it just sounds a little formal and technical. I've added a more casual way to express the same meaning if that's of interest.

But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video.

When YouTube found the music problemwasn't copyright free, it would offer some replaceable options.

It's often better to be specific.

IAlthough it's nice and thoughtful, but it's difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

Just an alternate way to write this sentence.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just havebe limited to those few music choices.

Another way to write this sentence. What you had makes sense, but this expresses the limitation more clearly.

Also.

If you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos.

Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them.

I wanted to share these delightful feelings, but there was always someone pressing the "dislike" button.

Sometimes it made me doubt my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.

But still, emotions doesn't always don't follow reasons.

I think this is a more natural way to word the expression.

Feedback

Great writing! Most of my comments are very small considerations or improvements, but overall it reads very well. I also like hiking and enjoyed your video very much. Looks like it was a beautiful place to be :)

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Tammy

yesterday

2

Thank you so much for such a quick correction! I learned a lot from your corrections and feedback.

The place was beautiful indeed. I hope that one day you can hike there in person, as my video didn't capture its full beauty.

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rperegrino

yesterday

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My pleasure Tammy. Where was the hike? I didn't see it mentioned in the video.

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Tammy

yesterday

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It's a small mountain called 青样山, located between 桐庐 and 富阳. It's approximately 230 kilometers away from the center of Shanghai and about 65 kilometers away from the center of Hangzhou.

I included the location in the description of the video.

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There was another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.


There wasI had another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.

"There was" is perfectly fine here, but it's often good to be less passive when opening a story. Saying "I had" puts you as a character in the story from the beginning.

There wasI had another music problem whenile I was uploading a new video to YouTube.

There was / I encountered / I had / I ran into another music problem when (or: while) uploading a new video to YouTube.

We tend to prefer active voice (“I did something”) instead of passive (“there was something”) in English.

There was another music problem when uploading a new video to YouTube.

I use Jianying APP to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it has already paid copyright fees.


I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it hassince they've already paid the copyright fees.

Don't forget to add the "the" before a noun (like "app"). Also, there's nothing grammatically wrong with the end of the sentence, it just sounds a little formal and technical. I've added a more casual way to express the same meaning if that's of interest.

I use Jianying APP to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it hasthey've already paid copyright fees.

I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which it has already paid copyright feesthe copyright fees have been paid.

Instead of I use, it should be I used: past tense

I use the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music for which {it has | they have} already paid the copyright fees.

In English, “app” isn’t capitalized. It’s short for “application” (as in “computer application” (software program)).

I used the Jianying APPapp to add music to my videos because it offers lots of free music, for which it has already paid copyright fees.

But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.


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But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTube.

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But sometimes, those don't cover the copyright on YouTubeOPTION A: However, some of the music is not covered by YouTube's copyright rules.¶
OPTION B: However, YouTube's copyright rules do not cover some of the audio content
.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video.


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It was really annoying because everyach time, I had chose then music that matched my feelings in the video.

"Every time" implies that there will be another clause, similarly to what you've done below. I've used a comma to make this sentence read a little better, and I've re-worded it to sound just a little more natural.

It was really annoying because every time I chose the music that matched my feelings in the video., when YouTube found…

I think this works better when combined with the next sentence.

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When YouTube found the music problem, it would offer some replaceable options.


When YouTube found the music problemwasn't copyright free, it would offer some replaceable options.

It's often better to be specific.

Whenever YouTube found thea music problem, it would offer some replaceablement options.

"Replaceable options" implies that the options themselves can be replaced, which doesn't really make sense.

When YouTube found out about the music problem, it would offered some replaceable options.

Saying it would offer makes it seem like it didn't happen, it offered would be better

W…when YouTube found a (copyright) problem with the music problem, it would {offer some replaceablement options | suggest some replacements}.

MY GUESS: When YouTube found the music problem, itpointed out the copyright problem, I was hoping they would offer some replaceable opalternative solutions.

It's nice and thoughtful, but it's difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.


IAlthough it's nice and thoughtful, but it's difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

Just an alternate way to write this sentence.

It' was nice and thoughtful, but it' was difficult to find an alternative that matchesd my feelings.

I'm pretty sure this should be in past tense.

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It'sYouTube's suggested sources were nice and thoughtful, but it' was difficult to find an alternative that matches my feelings.

I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.


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I found that there were some free pieces of music on YouTube that we could download too.

I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.


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I downloaded some that matched my feelings and decided to use them to replace my original music before uploading videos to YouTube.

Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.


Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just havebe limited to those few music choices.

Another way to write this sentence. What you had makes sense, but this expresses the limitation more clearly.

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Then the musical problem was resolved, even though my videos on YouTube would just have those few music choices.

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If you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?


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Iif you watch my video here https://www.youtube.com/shorts/3vZSN4Psv5c and enjoy it, would you please press the "like" button for me?

I love my videos.


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Every time I watch them, I feel transported back to the moment and place where I took them.


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Sometimes it made me doubt my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.


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Sometimes it made me doubt / question my act of sharing, especially when I was tired.

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I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.


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I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when therey are positive evaluations, but to offer them when therey are negative ones.

Alternatively: "...people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive things to say, but offer them when there are negative things." "Evaluation" is a very fancy word. To me, an "evaluation" is purely for business, or maybe education. Wikipedia describes it as "a systematic determination and assessment of a subject's merit, worth and significance". Basically: a very serious and professional review.

I know that, just like in our e-commerce industry, people tend not to express their opinions when there are positive evaluations, but to offer them when there are negative ones.

suggestion: “…people tend to keep their positive opinions to themselves, but are more vocal about their negative opinions.”

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But still, emotions always don't follow reasons.


But still, emotions doesn't always don't follow reasons.

I think this is a more natural way to word the expression.

But still, emotions don't always don't follow reasons.

But still, emotions always don'tnever follow reasons.

We say “never” instead of “always don’t,” but I wonder if maybe “don’t always” might be closer to what you want to say: emotions don’t always follow reason.

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I wanted to share these delightful feelings, but there was always someone pressing the "dislike" button.


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