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A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 to 25 of February. I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date. So I will reserve tomorrow morning. This is urgent thing because there are few discounted ticket for early reservations and it often sells out quickly. So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve as soon as get up.


2月23日から25日まで東京へ一人旅をする予定です。高速バスは旅行日の30日前から予約できるようになるので、明日の朝に予約します。早く予約すると割引チケットが得られるのですが、それはすぐに売り切れてしまうことが多いので、急を要します。明日の朝、起きたらすぐに予約します。

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A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 to 25 of February.

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus sincetarting 30 days before the travel date.

"since" is used for time in the past

So I will make a reserveation tomorrow morning.

The current sentence is a little ambiguous in that it can be interpreted as you are reserving for tomorrow instead of making a reservation tomorrow.

This is an urgent thing because there are few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

"urgent thing" is okay but a bit colloquial. You may also say "This is urgent because ..." instead.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve a ticket as soon as I get up.

or "So, tomorrow morning, I will make the reservation as soon as I get up."

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Wish I could go to Tokyo too, or anywhere in Japan for that matter! Enjoy your trip :)

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Mana

today

6

Thank you for your correction!
Although it takes a long time, in general, express bus costs about half as much as the Shinkansen.

A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23the 23rd to 25th of February.

or, more simply: "...from February 23 to 25."

I will be'm only able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

or: "You can only reserve a seat on an express bus 30 days before the designated travel date."

So I will reserve a seat (or ticket) tomorrow morning.

This is an urgent thing (or urgent matter) because there are only a few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve a seat (or ticket) as soon as I get up.

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Well done! Good luck on the reservation!

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today

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Thank you so much! Today, I could reserve a discounted ticket.
I have a question: Even if I talk about myself, can I say like " "You" can only reserve a seat on an express bus~"?

A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 tothe 23rd to the 25 of February.

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

I think this sentence sounds fine as is, but if you wanted to you could also say "...30 days before the travel date at the earliest".

So, I will make a reserveation tomorrow morning.

Or you could say "So, I will reserve my ride tomorrow morning". I think usually when you use "reserve" you also have to say what you're reserving. At least, I can't think of any examples off the top of my head where you don't pair it with the thing being reserved.

This is an urgent thing because there are (only a) few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

Since you're talking about more than one discounted ticket, you should use "they" instead of "it", and the appropriate verb form as well.
Also, "urgent thing" is fine, but a more natural expression might be "urgent matter".

So, at tomorrow morning, I will make a reserveation as soon as I get up.

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I hope you enjoy your trip.

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fesgtep

yesterday

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oh sorry, I missed this but it should be 25th instead of just 25.

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Mana

today

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Thank you for detailed explanations! I could reserve a discounted ticket!

A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23the 23rd to 25th of February.

You don't have to use the suffixes "-rd", "-th" etc. if you instead say "I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from February 23 to 25."

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

"Since" refers to a time in the past. However, this sentence is in the future tense due to the word "will". Hence, "since" is unnatural here.

So I will reserve tomorrow morning.

This is urgent thing because there are few discounted tickets for early reservations and it often sells out quickly.

(1) "Few" is plural, so we use the plural "tickets" as well.
(2) "Few discounted tickets" is okay, but the nuance is that it's emphasising the small number of tickets. If you simply wanted to say that there are discounted tickets, you would say "because there are a few discounted tickets".

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve as soon as I get up.

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Mana

today

6

Thank you so much!
Can I say "there are only a few discounted tickets" too?

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today

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That is okay as well. "Only" also places an emphasis on the small amount of tickets.

A reservation for an express bus

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 to 25 of February 23-25.

This is typically how we write dates, at least in the United States.

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus sincefor 30 days before the travel date.

So I will reserve it tomorrow morning.

This is an urgent thing because there are a few discounted tickets for early reservations and it often sells out quickly.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve it as soon as I get up.

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Just a few small corrections. Great job! Let me know if you have any questions.

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today

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Thank you so much! Your corrections were clear!

A reservation for an express bus


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I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 to 25 of February.


I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 to 25 of February 23-25.

This is typically how we write dates, at least in the United States.

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23the 23rd to 25th of February.

You don't have to use the suffixes "-rd", "-th" etc. if you instead say "I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from February 23 to 25."

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23 tothe 23rd to the 25 of February.

I am planning to travel to Tokyo alone from 23the 23rd to 25th of February.

or, more simply: "...from February 23 to 25."

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I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.


I will be able to make reservations for an express bus sincefor 30 days before the travel date.

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

"Since" refers to a time in the past. However, this sentence is in the future tense due to the word "will". Hence, "since" is unnatural here.

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

I think this sentence sounds fine as is, but if you wanted to you could also say "...30 days before the travel date at the earliest".

I will be'm only able to make reservations for an express bus since 30 days before the travel date.

or: "You can only reserve a seat on an express bus 30 days before the designated travel date."

I will be able to make reservations for an express bus sincetarting 30 days before the travel date.

"since" is used for time in the past

So I will reserve tomorrow morning.


So I will reserve it tomorrow morning.

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So, I will make a reserveation tomorrow morning.

Or you could say "So, I will reserve my ride tomorrow morning". I think usually when you use "reserve" you also have to say what you're reserving. At least, I can't think of any examples off the top of my head where you don't pair it with the thing being reserved.

So I will reserve a seat (or ticket) tomorrow morning.

So I will make a reserveation tomorrow morning.

The current sentence is a little ambiguous in that it can be interpreted as you are reserving for tomorrow instead of making a reservation tomorrow.

This is urgent thing because there are few discounted ticket for early reservations and it often sells out quickly.


This is an urgent thing because there are a few discounted tickets for early reservations and it often sells out quickly.

This is urgent thing because there are few discounted tickets for early reservations and it often sells out quickly.

(1) "Few" is plural, so we use the plural "tickets" as well. (2) "Few discounted tickets" is okay, but the nuance is that it's emphasising the small number of tickets. If you simply wanted to say that there are discounted tickets, you would say "because there are a few discounted tickets".

This is an urgent thing because there are (only a) few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

Since you're talking about more than one discounted ticket, you should use "they" instead of "it", and the appropriate verb form as well. Also, "urgent thing" is fine, but a more natural expression might be "urgent matter".

This is an urgent thing (or urgent matter) because there are only a few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

This is an urgent thing because there are few discounted tickets for early reservations and ithey often sells out quickly.

"urgent thing" is okay but a bit colloquial. You may also say "This is urgent because ..." instead.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve as soon as get up.


So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve it as soon as I get up.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve as soon as I get up.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will make a reserveation as soon as I get up.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve a seat (or ticket) as soon as I get up.

So, at tomorrow morning, I will reserve a ticket as soon as I get up.

or "So, tomorrow morning, I will make the reservation as soon as I get up."

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