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alfonsourbina

Jan. 12, 2023

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I do know it. For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they live is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night. Besides that, I already did not have money to take a taxi and buy the ice cream. I realize that in order to build my family project I badly need the money necessary to fuel that project. I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessities.

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We usually capitalize the first letter of words in titles.

I do know it.

For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they live is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the streets at night.

Besides that, I already did not have enough money to take a taxi and buy the ice cream.

I realize that in order to build my family project, I badly need the money necessary to fuel that project.

I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessities.

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Well done.

A request

I do know it.

For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take themhim/her to eat ice cream but the zonearea/suburb in which the/shey lives is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night.

Besides that, I already did not have enough money to take a taxi and also buy the ice cream.

I realize that in order to buildestablish my family project I badly need thed money necessary to fuel that projecto fund it.

I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessitieds.

For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they. However, the zone we live in is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night.

Besides that, I already did notdidn't even have money to take a taxi andor buy the ice cream.

I realize that in order to build my family project, I badly need the money necessary to fuel that projecto stay afloat.

I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessities.

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martin_pescador

Jan. 13, 2023

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Hice unas correcciones estilísticas -- no todas son necesarias. Avísame si tiene algún duda, y buena suerte con su proyecto.

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A rRequest

We usually capitalize the first letter of words in titles.

I do know it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they live is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night.


For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they. However, the zone we live in is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night.

For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take themhim/her to eat ice cream but the zonearea/suburb in which the/shey lives is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the street at night.

For example, we were having dinner and my 13 years old asked me to take them to eat ice cream but the zone in which they live is very dangerous and you can not take the risk of walking on the streets at night.

Besides that, I already did not have money to take a taxi and buy the ice cream.


Besides that, I already did notdidn't even have money to take a taxi andor buy the ice cream.

Besides that, I already did not have enough money to take a taxi and also buy the ice cream.

Besides that, I already did not have enough money to take a taxi and buy the ice cream.

I realize that in order to build my family project I badly need the money necessary to fuel that project.


I realize that in order to build my family project, I badly need the money necessary to fuel that projecto stay afloat.

I realize that in order to buildestablish my family project I badly need thed money necessary to fuel that projecto fund it.

I realize that in order to build my family project, I badly need the money necessary to fuel that project.

I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessities.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am not talking about buying their love but taking care of their physical and emotional necessitieds.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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