Jan. 30, 2021
A Reply to My Friend.
I often felt that I lived in a beautiful world and a nice society, and that is true. It only takes decades for our society to make such big progress. Even in the mid-1980s, on the season of our graduation, one of my classmates said to me: “after I got a job, I would buy a basket of eggs, and I eat it at anytime when I wanted.That was his biggest ideal at that time. Also, I have never thought that I would be able to live a life like today’s. So I am very grateful to our world and our country. I often work hard and study hard so that I will live up to the great era.
I have often felt that I lived in a beautiful world and a nice society, and that is true.
if you still feel this way occasionally, i think the correction reads better.
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a lot of / so much sounds better to me
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Jan. 30, 2021
Thank you very much.
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A Reply to My Friend. |
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I often felt that I lived in a beautiful world and a nice society, and that is true. I have often felt that I live if you still feel this way occasionally, i think the correction reads better. |
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It only takes decades for our society to make such big progress. It only takes decades for our society to make a lot of / so much sounds better to me |
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Even in the mid-1980s, on the season of our graduation, one of my classmates said to me: “after I got a job, I would buy a basket of eggs, and I eat it at anytime when I wanted.That was his biggest ideal at that time. Even in the mid-1980s, |
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Also, I have never thought that I would be able to live a life like today’s. Also, I have never thought that I would be able to live a life like the one I am living today just for clarity |
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So I am very grateful to our world and our country. |
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I often work hard and study hard so that I will live up to the great era. I often work hard and study hard so that I |
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