June 7, 2022
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Yes, you are right. Charming doesn't fit in this context.
Cowpeas are not like long beans that we can eat their seeds and the seeds' shells together. When we ate them, we liked to use a short but thin bamboo stick to string them from the center of each seed to make the seeds together as a string. We usually made two or three of these seed strings and boiled them in noodles. When they were well cooked, they were really delicious.
To describe the process of how we use a stick to make the cowpea seeds together as a string is very difficult for me. Even now, I still don't know if I express the process correctly, but I think you may already know what I exactly mean.
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Yes, you are right.
Charming doesn't fit in this context.
Cowpeas are not like long beans thatwhere we can eat their seeds and the seeds' shells together.
When we I used to eate them [with who?], we liked to use a short but, thin bamboo stick to string them from the center of each seed to make the seeds together as a stringtogether to make a string of seeds.
"we" isn't defined, so it's a little confusing. You could say something like "When I used to eat them with my family (for example), we liked to..." and that would be fine.
We usually made two or three of these seed strings and boiled them inwith noodles.
When they were well cooked, they were really delicious.
To describe the process of how we used a stick to make the cowpea seeds together as a string is very difficult for me.
Even now, I still don't know if I expressam explaining the process correctly, but I think you may already know what I exactly mean.
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Well written. You could have simplified some of your sentences down and they would have been easier for you to express (and more natural too). Very interesting read though!
June 7, 2022
Thank you very much
Yes, you are right. Charming doesn't fit in this context.
Cowpeas are not like long beans where we can eat the seed and the shell together. When I ate them, I liked to use a short, thin bamboo stick to string them together to make a string of seeds. We usually made two or three of these seed strings and boiled them with noodles. When they were well cooked, they were really delicious.
To describe the process of how I used a stick to make the cowpea seeds string is very difficult for me. Even now, I still don't know if I am expressing the process correctly, but I think you may already know what I mean.
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Yes, you are right. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Charming doesn't fit in this context. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Cowpeas are not like long beans that we can eat their seeds and the seeds' shells together. Cowpeas are not like long beans |
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When we ate them, we liked to use a short but thin bamboo stick to string them from the center of each seed to make the seeds together as a string. When "we" isn't defined, so it's a little confusing. You could say something like "When I used to eat them with my family (for example), we liked to..." and that would be fine. |
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We usually made two or three of these seed strings and boiled them in noodles. We usually made two or three of these seed strings and boiled them |
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When they were well cooked, they were really delicious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To describe the process of how we use a stick to make the cowpea seeds together as a string is very difficult for me. To describe the process of how we used a stick to make the cowpea seeds |
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Even now, I still don't know if I express the process correctly, but I think you may already know what I exactly mean. Even now, I still don't know if I |
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