March 18, 2022
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20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nicer weather for humans to live in, however there is no this place.
China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" it means that when you give roses to other people, your hands remain rose aroma. Giving always makes people happier than taking.
I haven't made posts on HelloTalk for a while. I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I would be active there after not long.
Yeah, it snows every year where I live during the Chinese New Year. Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives. For example, traffic issues, agricultural issues and so on.
I like island countries because they have beautiful scenery. Vast sea, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers. Moreover, the air there is extremely fresh.
I checked some photos of KL. The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, and what they are for.
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20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nicerst weather for humans to live in, however there is no thissuch place.
China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" i. It means that when you give roses to other people, your hands remtain the rose's aroma.
That's such a cool idiom :)
Giving always makes people happier than taking.
I haven't made posts on HelloTalk for a while.
I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I wouldill be active there after not longin a little while.
Yeah, it snows every year where I live during the Chinese New Year.
Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives.;
Ffor example, traffic issues, agricultural issues and so on.
I've joined this sentence onto the last sentence. If you are still talking about the previous idea, it's best not to begin sentences with "for example". :)
I like island countries because they have such beautiful scenery.
The word "such" makes this sentence feel more natural. Alternatively, you could say "I like island countries because of the beautiful scenery".
Vast seas, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers.
Again it somehow feels more natural to write "sea" as plural here :)
Moreover, the air there is extremely fresh.
I checkedlooked through/at some photos of KL.
The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, andor what they are for.
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20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nicer weather for humans to live in, however there is no this place. 20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nice |
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China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" it means that when you give roses to other people, your hands remain rose aroma. China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" That's such a cool idiom :) |
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Giving always makes people happier than taking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I haven't made posts on HelloTalk for a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I would be active there after not long. I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I w |
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Yeah, it snows every year where I live during the Chinese New Year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives. Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives |
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For example, traffic issues, agricultural issues and so on.
I've joined this sentence onto the last sentence. If you are still talking about the previous idea, it's best not to begin sentences with "for example". :) |
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I like island countries because they have beautiful scenery. I like island countries because they have such beautiful scenery. The word "such" makes this sentence feel more natural. Alternatively, you could say "I like island countries because of the beautiful scenery". |
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Vast sea, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers. Vast seas, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers. Again it somehow feels more natural to write "sea" as plural here :) |
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Moreover, the air there is extremely fresh. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I checked some photos of KL. I |
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The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, and what they are for. The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, |
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