March 17, 2022
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I checked the highest historical temperature in summer in Anhui. It was just 38 degrees.
I personally think spring and autumn are the best seasons for travelling in Anhui province because they are neither hot nor cold.
Thank you for your kindness. Somehow, I am not good at socializing. If you take me around, I don't know what I should do in return, and I don't even know what I should say to you.
If I visit Malaysia, I prefer travelling alone. At maximum, I treat you to a meal before I leave.
Yeah, I learned that in most Southeast Asian island countries, they only have two seasons: summer and rainy.
I checked the weather in KL. The temperature is 2 to 3 degrees higher than that in Sanya, Hainan Island.
Wenchang is a county-level city in the northeast part of Hainan island and it is very famous for its local dish of chicken. Another famous Hainan dish is Dongshan lamb.
Now I don't have the money to help the poor because all my income is my salary and it can only satisfy my daily needs, no more left over.
My ideal plan is to run a business making money for people who need help.
Yeah, having a house on Hainan island means you are a rich person.
Right now, in Sanya, the average house price is about 38,000 RMB per square meter. Some coastal villas start at the price of 10 million RMB.
Yeah, Hainan island is in a tropical area. I think it would look very like Singapore and Malaysia.
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I checked the highest historical temperature in summer in Anhui.
It was just 38 degrees.
I personally think spring and autumn are the best seasons for travelling in the Anhui province because they are neither hot nor cold.
Thank you for your kindness.
SomehowFor some reason, I am not good at socializing.
"Somehow" feels a bit odd here -- it sounds like you're very surprised that you can't socialise and cannot understand it, if that makes sense. I think "for some reason" works better :)
If you were to take me around, I wouldon't know what I should do in return, and I wouldon't even know what I should say to you.
This makes it clearer that you are speaking hypothetically about going on a trip with this person. If you just mean that in general, you don't know how to behave when people take you about with them, then your original sentence is fine and feel free to ignore :)
If I were to visit Malaysia, I would prefer travelling alone.
Again, this makes it more clear that you are talking hypothetically. :)
At maximum, Iost, I would treat you to a meal before I leave.
"At maximum" is technically correct but feels slightly stilted.
Yeah, I learned that in most Southeast Asian island countries, they only have two seasons: summer and rainy.
I checked the weather in KL.
The temperature is 2 to 3 degrees higher than that in Sanya, Hainan Island.
Wenchang is a county-level city in the northeast part of Hainan island and it is very famous for its local dish of chicken.
Another famous Hainan dish is Dongshan lamb.
Now I don't have the money to help the poor because all mmy only income is my salary and it can only satisfy my daily needs,; no more left over.
My ideal plan is todream/hope/goal is to one day run a business making money for people who need help.
"Ideal plan" doesn't quite sound natural. Another way you could say this is "Ideally, I'd like to one day run a business one day making money ..."
Yeah, having a house on Hainan island means you armust be a rich person.
Right now, in Sanya, the average house price is about 38,000 RMB per square meter.
Some coastal villas start at the price of 10 million RMB.
Yeah, Hainan island is in a tropical area.
I think it would look very much like Singapore and Malaysia.
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Great job, this is nicely written and all the corrections are minor -- you've communicated your point very well :)
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Now I don't have the money to help the poor because all my income is my salary and it can only satisfy my daily needs, no more left over. Now I don't have the money to help the poor because |
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I checked the highest historical temperature in summer in Anhui. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was just 38 degrees. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I personally think spring and autumn are the best seasons for travelling in Anhui province because they are neither hot nor cold. I personally think spring and autumn are the best seasons for travelling in the Anhui province because they are neither hot nor cold. |
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Thank you for your kindness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Somehow, I am not good at socializing.
"Somehow" feels a bit odd here -- it sounds like you're very surprised that you can't socialise and cannot understand it, if that makes sense. I think "for some reason" works better :) |
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If you take me around, I don't know what I should do in return, and I don't even know what I should say to you. If you were to take me around, I would This makes it clearer that you are speaking hypothetically about going on a trip with this person. If you just mean that in general, you don't know how to behave when people take you about with them, then your original sentence is fine and feel free to ignore :) |
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If I visit Malaysia, I prefer travelling alone. If I were to visit Malaysia, I would prefer travelling alone. Again, this makes it more clear that you are talking hypothetically. :) |
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At maximum, I treat you to a meal before I leave. At m "At maximum" is technically correct but feels slightly stilted. |
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Yeah, I learned that in most Southeast Asian island countries, they only have two seasons: summer and rainy. Yeah, I learned that |
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I checked the weather in KL. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The temperature is 2 to 3 degrees higher than that in Sanya, Hainan Island. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wenchang is a county-level city in the northeast part of Hainan island and it is very famous for its local dish of chicken. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another famous Hainan dish is Dongshan lamb. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My ideal plan is to run a business making money for people who need help. My "Ideal plan" doesn't quite sound natural. Another way you could say this is "Ideally, I'd like to one day run a business one day making money ..." |
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Yeah, having a house on Hainan island means you are a rich person. Yeah, having a house on Hainan island means you |
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Right now, in Sanya, the average house price is about 38,000 RMB per square meter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some coastal villas start at the price of 10 million RMB. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yeah, Hainan island is in a tropical area. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think it would look very like Singapore and Malaysia. I think it would look very much like Singapore and Malaysia. |
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