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The temperature between 25 and 35 is also good. It's unlikely for me to settle there, but I do want to pay a visit after I retire.

I am not sure if the temperature actually reaches 45 in summer. I just guess because it's said when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know. It may just be a rumor.

I haven't eaten chicken rice, but I have eaten Wenchang chicken and it is not bad.

Helping the unfortunate is my next plan. After I travel all over the world, if I am still in a good state of health, I'd like to run some business to make money to help the poorer, and I think I will be very happy by doing so.

In fact, we don't need to have too much money. A certain amount of money is enough. The money you don't spend is not yours, it's just a number, and it only belongs to our society.

I have been to Hainan twice. Yes, it has a lot of beautiful scenery, and people are very proud of owning a house there. During every Chinese New Year, many mainland people go to Hainan to spend their holidays.

I will find some photos of Hainan island and send them to you.

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The temperature between 25 and 35 is also goodnice for me.

This is a very abrupt start, so I tried to smooth it at least a little bit...

It's unlikely for me to probably won't settle there, but I do want to pay it a visit after I retire.

I just guest seems that it does because it's said that when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know.

I don't understand this sentence... The government won't tell us if it is 45 degrees out? The government usually isn't the source of knowing the temperature so there must be some irony here...?

It may just be a rumor.

I haven't eaten chicken rice, but I have eaten Wenchang chicken and it is not bad.

Helping the unfortunate is my next plan.

After I travel all over the world, if I am still in a good state of health, I'd like to run somea business to make money to help the poorer, and I think I will be very happy by doing thiso.

In fact, we don't need to have too much money.

A certain amount of money is enough.

This is very vague and pretty much a repetition of the previous sentence. I would delete it.

The money you don't spend is not yours, it's just a number, and it only belongs to our society.

I have been to Hainan twice.

Yes, it has a lot of beautiful scenery, and people are very proud of owning a house there.

During every Chinese New Year, many mainland people go to Hainan to spendfor their holidays.

I will find some photos of Hainan island and send them to you.

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Jack

March 16, 2022

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I just guest seems that it does because it's said that when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know.

In summer in China, it is said according to some Chinese policy, workers should stop work while the temperature is over 40 degrees, so as the say “the government won’t let us know when the temperature is over 40”, but all these are just heard, no basis.

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Jack

March 16, 2022

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Thank you very much

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The temperature between 25 and 35 is also good.


The temperature between 25 and 35 is also goodnice for me.

This is a very abrupt start, so I tried to smooth it at least a little bit...

It's unlikely for me to settle there, but I do want to pay a visit after I retire.


It's unlikely for me to probably won't settle there, but I do want to pay it a visit after I retire.

I am not sure if the temperature actually reaches 45 in summer.


I just guess because it's said when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know.


I just guest seems that it does because it's said that when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know.

I don't understand this sentence... The government won't tell us if it is 45 degrees out? The government usually isn't the source of knowing the temperature so there must be some irony here...?

It may just be a rumor.


I haven't eaten chicken rice, but I have eaten Wenchang chicken and it is not bad.


Helping the unfortunate is my next plan.


After I travel all over the world, if I am still in a good state of health, I'd like to run some business to make money to help the poorer, and I think I will be very happy by doing so.


After I travel all over the world, if I am still in a good state of health, I'd like to run somea business to make money to help the poorer, and I think I will be very happy by doing thiso.

In fact, we don't need to have too much money.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A certain amount of money is enough.


The money you don't spend is not yours, it's just a number, and it only belongs to our society.


I have been to Hainan twice.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yes, it has a lot of beautiful scenery, and people are very proud of owning a house there.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

During every Chinese New Year, many mainland people go to Hainan to spend their holidays.


I will find some photos of Hainan island and send them to you.


The temperature between 25 and 35 is also good.


It's unlikely for me to settle there, but I do want to pay a visit after I retire.


I am not sure if the temperature actually reaches 45 in summer.


I just guess because it's said when it's 45 degrees the government won't let us know.


It may just be a rumor.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I haven't eaten chicken rice, but I have eaten Wenchang chicken and it is not bad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Helping the unfortunate is my next plan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I travel all over the world, if I am still in a good state of health, I'd like to run some business to make money to help the poorer, and I think I will be very happy by doing so.


In fact, we don't need to have too much money.


A certain amount of money is enough.


A certain amount of money is enough.

This is very vague and pretty much a repetition of the previous sentence. I would delete it.

The money you don't spend is not yours, it's just a number, and it only belongs to our society.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been to Hainan twice.


Yes, it has a lot of beautiful scenery, and people are very proud of owning a house there.


During every Chinese New Year, many mainland people go to Hainan to spend their holidays.


During every Chinese New Year, many mainland people go to Hainan to spendfor their holidays.

I will find some photos of Hainan island and send them to you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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