March 5, 2022
A Reply
No. Anhui is a province in the east-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital. It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200.
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. The famous scenic spots are Huang Mountain and Jiuhua Mountain.
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers.
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000.
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China. Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on. So my city is an agricultural city.
In my opinion, you already have a decent job. Of course, if you can be a columnist, that will be nicer. You can give it a shot.
One thing before the pandemic I miss the most is that we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we even eliminated the thought of traveling.
Here are some photos of Fuyang city. Hope you enjoy them.
A Reply
No.
Anhui is a province in the eEast-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital.
It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200.
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts.
I'm not sure if "governs" is correct here, but it is clearly understood either way. "Manages", "consists of" or just "contains" are all good.
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers.
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000.
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China.
Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on.
Nitpick, but if you say "mainly", it's expected that you will not include an exhaustive list. "and so on" also implies the list is not exhaustive. It's a bit redundant.
So my city is an agricultural city.
In my opinion, you already have a decent job.
Of course, if you can become a columnist, that will be nicould be even better.
You can give it a shot.
OThe one thing from before the pandemic that I miss (the) most is that we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we even eliminated the thoughtdon't even think of traveling.
The word order at the beginning was a bit off.
"eliminated the thought“ is understood, but maybe "got rid of the thought” would be more natural.
Here are some photos of Fuyang city.
Hope you enjoy them.
Feedback
Ha, I like the "No." as the opener. What was the question, if it's not a secret?
March 6, 2022
In my penpal's previous reply, she said that she thought Anhui was a city, but it actually is a province. That's why I said "no" in the very beginning. Thank you very much.
A Reply
No.
Anhui is a province in the east-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital.
It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200.
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts.
The famous scenic spots are Huang Mountain and Jiuhua Mountain.
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers.
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000.
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China.
"Is a big plain" seems redundant when you later state that it "is part of the Huabei Plain."
Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on.
So my city is an agricultural city.
In my opinion, you already have a decent job.
Of course, if you can be a columnist, that will be nicer.
You can give it a shot.
One thingof the things from before the pandemic I miss the most is thathow we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we have even eliminated the thought of traveling.
The present perfect is better since it describes an ongoing situation.
Here are some photos of Fuyang city.
Hope you enjoy them.
Feedback
It's great that you included some photos!
March 5, 2022
Thank you very much for correcting my journal.
|
No. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
A Reply This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Anhui is a province in the east-central part of China, and Hefei is the capital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Anhui is a province in the |
|
It covers an area of 140,100 square kilometers and has a population of 61,027,200. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It governs 16 prefecture-level cities, 9 county-level cities, 50 counties and 45 municipal districts. I'm not sure if "governs" is correct here, but it is clearly understood either way. "Manages", "consists of" or just "contains" are all good. |
|
The famous scenic spots are Huang Mountain and Jiuhua Mountain. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
My city, Fuyang, is a prefecture-level city, which is located in the northwest part of Anhui province and covers an area of 160 square kilometers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It governs 3 municipal districts, 1 county-level city, 4 counties and has a population of 11,000,000. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The Fuyang area is a big plain, which is a part of the Huabei Plain of China. The Fuyang area is a "Is a big plain" seems redundant when you later state that it "is part of the Huabei Plain." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Farmers here mainly grow wheat, rice, corn, soybeans and so on. Nitpick, but if you say "mainly", it's expected that you will not include an exhaustive list. "and so on" also implies the list is not exhaustive. It's a bit redundant. |
|
So my city is an agricultural city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In my opinion, you already have a decent job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Of course, if you can be a columnist, that will be nicer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Of course, if you can become a columnist, that w |
|
You can give it a shot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
One thing before the pandemic I miss the most is that we could travel anywhere we wanted without any worries, but now, it's very different, and we even eliminated the thought of traveling. One The present perfect is better since it describes an ongoing situation.
The word order at the beginning was a bit off. "eliminated the thought“ is understood, but maybe "got rid of the thought” would be more natural. |
|
Here are some photos of Fuyang city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Hope you enjoy them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium