March 4, 2022
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Writing is so simple. You can write anything you want as long as you are interested in them. For example, when you were young, there would be many unforgettable things. You can write them. You said you want to learn Cantonese, so you can also write it; why? Or anything interesting with Cantonese.
The pandemic situation in Anhui is very good because so far there’s not a single case. But in Hong Kong it’s really the worst. The new infection has increased by over 50000 a day.
No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. I worry that we are not able to eliminate it, and it will exist with us. So stay safe and stay healthy.
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Writing is so simple.
You can write about anything you want as long as you are interested in ithem.
For example, when you were young, there would behave been many unforgettable things.
You can write about them.
You said you want to learn Cantonese, so you can also write it; why?
Or anything interesting with Cantonese.
The pandemic situation in Anhui is very good because so far there’s not a single case.
But in Hong Kong it’s really the worst.
The rate of new infections has increased byto over 50,000 a day.
No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. (?)
I don't understand what you mean by the "stuff" that covid is. Everyone knows its a sort of coronavirus, that's where it got its name from.
I worry that we arewill not be able to eliminate it, and that it will continue to exist with us.
So stay safe and stay healthy.
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Great little piece of writing, good job! Just be mindful of the fact that in English we use a lot of words to mark tense, and often your writing feels incomplete and like it's missing words because you haven't marked your tense correctly.
March 5, 2022
For example, when you were young, there would behave been many unforgettable things.
Could you please tell why you use “would have been” instead of “would be”?
March 5, 2022
You can write about them.
Can I drop the “about”?
March 5, 2022
No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. (?)
Yes, you are right. It’s a kind of virus. I wrote it wrong.
March 5, 2022
I worry that we arewill not be able to eliminate it, and that it will continue to exist with us.
What is the difference between “are not able to” and “will not be able to”?
March 5, 2022
Thank you for your corrections and recommendations. Thank you very much.
March 5, 2022
In response to why I used “would have been” and “will not be able to”: it’s all a matter of tense. For the former you needed to use the past tense and the latter required the future tense because the actions take place at those times. The former talks about being young which necessarily happens in the past while the latter talks about one’s hopes for what will happen in the future.
In regards to the dropping of the ‘about’: no, you can’t drop it. Saying “you can write them” implies that you’re writing, something like a letter, to another person. You need the ‘about’ to clarify what you mean.
March 6, 2022
Thank you for your response.
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You can write anything you want as long as you are interested in them. You can write about anything you want as long as you are interested in it |
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For example, when you were young, there would be many unforgettable things. For example, when you were young, there would |
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You said you want to learn Cantonese, so you can also write it; why? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Or anything interesting with Cantonese. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The pandemic situation in Anhui is very good because so far there’s not a single case. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But in Hong Kong it’s really the worst. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The new infection has increased by over 50000 a day. The rate of new infections has increased |
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No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. No one knows the origin of the Covid, even what stuff it is. (?) I don't understand what you mean by the "stuff" that covid is. Everyone knows its a sort of coronavirus, that's where it got its name from. |
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I worry that we are not able to eliminate it, and it will exist with us. I worry that we |
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So stay safe and stay healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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