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Jan. 28, 2022

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicating with you, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before that, our discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmaster of my previous work unit. I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the positions.

We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people leading group for professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules.

It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process. But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful. If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictly.

Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year. All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.

I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad things.

I used a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already done.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad things.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago. Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood. I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to cure my mood. If I feel well, I will let you know. Thank you very much.

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicatingnot writh youing, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before thatRecently, our discipline inspection department informasked me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before I transferred to my current work unidepartment, I was the headmaster of my previous work unidepartment.

I don't know if you have heard that in China inare aware, but Chinese public institutions, staff gainare granted their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

In 2018, our work unit only haddepartment had only two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to those positions.

We held a general meeting ofwith all staff present to select the five people to leading group for a professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rul group. That group then set guidelines for the promotion, and two people were selected based on those guidelines.

It was extremely fair, and I was impartial enough during the whole process.

ButHowever, someone alwayis blamesing me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

This is the third time they have reported me for no reason. I know it's them even though they do it reports are anonymously.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful.

If we did wrong thisomething wrongs, we would be punished strictharshly.

Many Chinese officials at everyall levels are fired and are put in jailsed every year.

All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.

I becomegot very upset when I received calls from it although I haven'tthem despite having done bad nothings wrong.

I usedt took me a week to explain all the accusations in formal paperformally respond to the accusations, but I still don't know if it's already donethe issue is settled yet.

Hopefully everything is goinggoes well because I really didn't do bad things nothing wrong.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago.

Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood.

I feel like "still" in unnecessary here since "currently" sort of implies it. Keeping it is fine, too.

I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted toso I could have a break to curhelp improve my mood.

If I feel well, I will let you know when I feel better.

Thank you very much.

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Jack

Jan. 29, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicanot writing withto you, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before that, oOur discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmastmanager of my previous work unit.

Headmaster is usually for a school.

I don't know if you have heard that in China, in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to these positions.

We held a general meeting of all the staff to select the five people to leading the group for professional title evaluation, and the rules were madeset by this five people group, then two people won according to the rulesgroup, as per the rules two people were successful.

It was extremely fair and I was fully impartial enough during the whole process.

But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

I would start the sentence with just because I was in charge, …..I am blamed if someone is not promoted

This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.

Again the sentence may be more powerful if you start with ..even though they do it anonymously, this is the third time…..

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful.

If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictlyo things incorrectly, we will be severely punished.

Many Chinese officials at every level are firdismissed and are put in jails every year.

All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.

I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad anythings wrong.

I usedspent a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already doncomplete.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad anythings wrong.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago.

Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood.

I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to curimprove my mood.

IfWhen I feel well, I will let you know.

Thank you very much.

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Jack

Jan. 29, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicating with you, and I hope everything is going well for you.


Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicanot writing withto you, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Hi Sabine, I am very sorry for stopping communicatingnot writh youing, and I hope everything is going well for you.

Before that, our discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.


Before that, oOur discipline inspection department informed me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before thatRecently, our discipline inspection department informasked me to explain some things clearly because someone reported me.

Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmaster of my previous work unit.


Before I transferred to my current work unit, I was the headmastmanager of my previous work unit.

Headmaster is usually for a school.

Before I transferred to my current work unidepartment, I was the headmaster of my previous work unidepartment.

I don't know if you have heard that in China in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.


I don't know if you have heard that in China, in public institutions, staff gain their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

I don't know if you have heard that in China inare aware, but Chinese public institutions, staff gainare granted their salaries based on their professional and technical titles.

In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to the positions.


In 2018, our work unit only had two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to these positions.

In 2018, our work unit only haddepartment had only two senior engineer positions, but five people were qualified to be promoted to those positions.

We held a general meeting of all staff to select the five people leading group for professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rules.


We held a general meeting of all the staff to select the five people to leading the group for professional title evaluation, and the rules were madeset by this five people group, then two people won according to the rulesgroup, as per the rules two people were successful.

We held a general meeting ofwith all staff present to select the five people to leading group for a professional title evaluation, and rules were made by this five people group, then two people won according to the rul group. That group then set guidelines for the promotion, and two people were selected based on those guidelines.

It was extremely fair and I was impartial enough during the whole process.


It was extremely fair and I was fully impartial enough during the whole process.

It was extremely fair, and I was impartial enough during the whole process.

But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.


But someone always blames me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

I would start the sentence with just because I was in charge, …..I am blamed if someone is not promoted

ButHowever, someone alwayis blamesing me for not getting promoted, just because I was in charge at that time.

This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.


This is the third time they reported me for no reason even though they do it anonymously.

Again the sentence may be more powerful if you start with ..even though they do it anonymously, this is the third time…..

This is the third time they have reported me for no reason. I know it's them even though they do it reports are anonymously.

In China, the State Discipline Inspection Department is very powerful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictly.


If we did wrong things, we would be punished strictlyo things incorrectly, we will be severely punished.

If we did wrong thisomething wrongs, we would be punished strictharshly.

Many Chinese officials at every level are fired and are put in jails every year.


Many Chinese officials at every level are firdismissed and are put in jails every year.

Many Chinese officials at everyall levels are fired and are put in jailsed every year.

All the national public officials are afraid to receive calls from the Discipline Inspection Commission.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad things.


I become very upset when I receive calls from it although I haven't done bad anythings wrong.

I becomegot very upset when I received calls from it although I haven'tthem despite having done bad nothings wrong.

I used a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already done.


I usedspent a week to explain all the accusations in formal papers, but I still don't know if it's already doncomplete.

I usedt took me a week to explain all the accusations in formal paperformally respond to the accusations, but I still don't know if it's already donethe issue is settled yet.

Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad things.


Hopefully everything is going well because I really didn't do bad anythings wrong.

Hopefully everything is goinggoes well because I really didn't do bad things nothing wrong.

By the way, my mom just died three days ago.


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Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.


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Thank you for your concerns about her when she was alive.

Currently, I am still in a bad mood.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Currently, I am still in a bad mood.

I feel like "still" in unnecessary here since "currently" sort of implies it. Keeping it is fine, too.

I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to cure my mood.


I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted to have a break to curimprove my mood.

I almost stopped all my learning because I wanted toso I could have a break to curhelp improve my mood.

If I feel well, I will let you know.


IfWhen I feel well, I will let you know.

If I feel well, I will let you know when I feel better.

Thank you very much.


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