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Jack

Jan. 1, 2022

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Hi Tim, thank you for sending me the link.
The tuoche was mainly used to transport farm tools. Since we didn't have any vehicles at that time, how could we take them into fields? Every time farmers needed to plow the land, they put plows and rakes on it and let horses or cows pull it into the fields. Apart from this, I don't think it had any use because it is too primitive and simple.
In the link, I found a picture which I did see in my village. A people, a simple wooden plow and a cow or horse, which was how we plow the land, as well as how we sow.
Sometimes, some people would help the cow to pull because just one cow doesn't have enough strength. But I didn't do that because back then I was just a kid.

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Hi Tim, thank you for sending me the link.

The tuo che was mainly used to transport farm tools.

I think you are referring to 拖车 or 拖車, right?
It is better to write "tuo che" with two words, just as there are also two Chinese characters. You could also include the Chinese characters in your sentence to help the reader understand it is a foreign word. E.g. "The tuo che (拖车) was mainly...". It depends on who your reader is - if they already know the word "tuo che", etc.

If you write "tuoche" as one word, it looks very much like the English word "touche", so some people might think you have mis-spelled it and will get confused.

Since we didn't have any vehicles at that time, how could we take them into fields?

Every time farmers needed to plow the land, they put plows and rakes on it and let horses or cows pull it into the fields.

Apart from this, I don't think it had any use because ithey are is too primitive and simple.

In the link, I found a picture which I didhave seen in my village.

Did you see this picture in your village? If so: "I found a picture which I have seen in my village"
Or, does the picture show something (equipment) that you have seen in your village? If so, "I found a picture with (equipment) I have seen in my village."

A peopleIt contains a person, a simple wooden plow and a cow or horse, which was how we plowed the land, as well as how we sowed.

"person" = singular, and "people" = plural

Sometimes, some people would help the cow to pull the plow because just one cow doesidn't have enough strength.

But I didn't do that because back then I was just a kid.

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I'm not exactly sure what you mean in your sentence "In the link, I found a picture which I did see in my village." I've added some suggestions, but let me know if you'd like more help with this.

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Jack

Jan. 1, 2022

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Thank you very much. One of my penpals sent me a web address, opened the site I saw the picture attached to this reply. I found a picture with (equipment) I have seen in my village.

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barleytea

Jan. 2, 2022

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Ahh alright, so that would be "In the link, I found a picture with equipment I have seen in my village."
Nice!

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Jack

Jan. 2, 2022

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Thank you very much.

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Hi Tim, thank you for sending me the link.


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The tuoche was mainly used to transport farm tools.


The tuo che was mainly used to transport farm tools.

I think you are referring to 拖车 or 拖車, right? It is better to write "tuo che" with two words, just as there are also two Chinese characters. You could also include the Chinese characters in your sentence to help the reader understand it is a foreign word. E.g. "The tuo che (拖车) was mainly...". It depends on who your reader is - if they already know the word "tuo che", etc. If you write "tuoche" as one word, it looks very much like the English word "touche", so some people might think you have mis-spelled it and will get confused.

Since we didn't have any vehicles at that time, how could we take them into fields?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every time farmers needed to plow the land, they put plows and rakes on it and let horses or cows pull it into the fields.


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Apart from this, I don't think it had any use because it is too primitive and simple.


Apart from this, I don't think it had any use because ithey are is too primitive and simple.

In the link, I found a picture which I did see in my village.


In the link, I found a picture which I didhave seen in my village.

Did you see this picture in your village? If so: "I found a picture which I have seen in my village" Or, does the picture show something (equipment) that you have seen in your village? If so, "I found a picture with (equipment) I have seen in my village."

A people, a simple wooden plow and a cow or horse, which was how we plow the land, as well as how we sow.


A peopleIt contains a person, a simple wooden plow and a cow or horse, which was how we plowed the land, as well as how we sowed.

"person" = singular, and "people" = plural

Sometimes, some people would help the cow to pull because just one cow doesn't have enough strength.


Sometimes, some people would help the cow to pull the plow because just one cow doesidn't have enough strength.

But I didn't do that because back then I was just a kid.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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