Dec. 27, 2021
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No worries Mojo, thank you for keeping sending me voice messages even though you are so busy. I really appreciate it.
Here the lowest temperature is minus 7 degrees Celsius, but in the afternoon, the highest temperature can reach 12 degrees Celsius.
I know a little bit about why Chinese people give apples on Christmas Eve. It's said that Christmas Eve is also called 平安夜 (píngānyè), its first character has the same pronunciation as the first character of 苹果 (píngguǒ), so people think that giving apples means giving safety. But I don't know where the metaphor originally came from.
These past few years, Chinese people seem not to celebrate Christmas anymore because our government is opposed to Chinese people celebrating foreign holidays.
The government advocates us to celebrate Chinese traditional holidays, such as the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Chinese New Year.
I played guitar for a short period when I was at technical secondary school. The song I once played is "Little Secret" sung by a famous Chinese male singer, Zhangxing.
I can't imagine how to live in the weather when the temperature is around minus thirty, let alone minus forty. So keep warm and healthy.
Getting to meet you is my biggest honor because you helped me with my English a lot. Thankfully, my English has become better and better with your help.
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No worries Mojo, thank you for keepingcarrying on sending me voice messages even though you are so busy.
I just thought this wording sounded more natural
I really appreciate it.
Here the lowest temperature is minus 7 degrees Celsius, but in the afternoon, the highest temperature can reach 12 degrees Celsius.
I know a little bit about why Chinese people give apples on Christmas Eve.
It's said that Christmas Eve is also called 平安夜 (píngānyè), its first character has the same pronunciation as the first character of 苹果 (píngguǒ), so people think that giving apples means giving safety.
But I don't know where the metaphor originally came from.
These past few years, Chinese people seem to not to celebrate Christmas anymore because our government is opposed to Chinese people celebrating foreign holidays.
I switched round the not and to so it was grammatically correct
The government advocates us to celebrate Chinese traditional holidays, such as the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Chinese New Year.
I played guitar for a short period when I was at technical secondary school.
The song I once played is "Little Secret" sung by a famous Chinese male singer, Zhangxing.
I can't imagine how to live in theat weather when the temperature is around minus thirty, let alone minus forty.
So keep warm and healthy.
Getting to meet you is my biggest honor because you helped me with my English a lot.
Thankfully, my English has become better and better with your help.
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Dec. 28, 2021
Thank you very much for correcting my junior. You are very helpful.
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No worries Mojo, thank you for keeping sending me voice messages even though you are so busy. No worries Mojo, thank you for I just thought this wording sounded more natural |
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I really appreciate it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here the lowest temperature is minus 7 degrees Celsius, but in the afternoon, the highest temperature can reach 12 degrees Celsius. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I know a little bit about why Chinese people give apples on Christmas Eve. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's said that Christmas Eve is also called 平安夜 (píngānyè), its first character has the same pronunciation as the first character of 苹果 (píngguǒ), so people think that giving apples means giving safety. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I don't know where the metaphor originally came from. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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These past few years, Chinese people seem not to celebrate Christmas anymore because our government is opposed to Chinese people celebrating foreign holidays. These past few years, Chinese people seem to not I switched round the not and to so it was grammatically correct |
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The government advocates us to celebrate Chinese traditional holidays, such as the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Chinese New Year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I played guitar for a short period when I was at technical secondary school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The song I once played is "Little Secret" sung by a famous Chinese male singer, Zhangxing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can't imagine how to live in the weather when the temperature is around minus thirty, let alone minus forty. I can't imagine how to live in th |
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So keep warm and healthy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Getting to meet you is my biggest honor because you helped me with my English a lot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thankfully, my English has become better and better with your help. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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