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Jack

Dec. 29, 2021

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Hello Tim, in this paragraph, I learned "provoking, convoluted, simultaneously and clarity." They are all new words.

Thank you for your kind words and encouragement and I feel flattered.

I know what you mean because I have a lawyer's certificate. As lawyers, when they write documents, they have to write very closely, so they often write sentences with many strict limitations. I don't think they really want to do that, it's just because of the requirements of their profession. But your opinions are right.

As I said to you before, learning a language brings me a lot of fun. Since I started learning English, I haven't felt bored.

I hope you have lots of enjoyment in learning Chinese too. In fact, your Chinese is also good. Please keep it up and I would like to learn together with you.

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As lawyers, when they write documents, they have to write very clo(carefully or precisely), so they often write sentences with many strict limitations.

Writing "closely" doesn't by itself make much sense, as this would generally mean being physically close to another person (two people sitting next to each other). I've suggested "carefully" or "precisely" as alternatives that fit better.

As I said to you before, learning a language brings meis a lot of fun.

"is a lot of fun" or "brings me a lot of joy" would both make sense, but it isn't correct to bring someone fun.

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Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 29, 2021

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As lawyers, when they write documents, they have to write very clo(carefully or precisely), so they often write sentences with many strict limitations.

The word I was looking for is actually 严密, but I didn’t know how to say it in English. I searched for it on translating apps, and the apps said it is “closely”. I was also confused when I saw the results, but I had no other choice.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Dec. 30, 2021

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Thank you very much for correcting my junior. I appreciate it.

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Hello Tim, in this paragraph, I learned "provoking, convoluted, simultaneously and clarity."


They are all new words.


Thank you for your kind words and encouragement and I feel flattered.


I know what you mean because I have a lawyer's certificate.


As lawyers, when they write documents, they have to write very closely, so they often write sentences with many strict limitations.


As lawyers, when they write documents, they have to write very clo(carefully or precisely), so they often write sentences with many strict limitations.

Writing "closely" doesn't by itself make much sense, as this would generally mean being physically close to another person (two people sitting next to each other). I've suggested "carefully" or "precisely" as alternatives that fit better.

I don't think they really want to do that, it's just because of the requirements of their profession.


But your opinions are right.


As I said to you before, learning a language brings me a lot of fun.


As I said to you before, learning a language brings meis a lot of fun.

"is a lot of fun" or "brings me a lot of joy" would both make sense, but it isn't correct to bring someone fun.

Since I started learning English, I haven't felt bored.


I hope you have lots of enjoyment in learning Chinese too.


In fact, your Chinese is also good.


Please keep it up and I would like to learn together with you.


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