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A Reason to Admire Myself
A clear and genuine reason to admire myself is:
I have the emotional bravery that not many people have.
I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look at what's hurting me, give it a name, write, correct, question it, and face it with impressive honestly.
The majority of people flee from their wounds. I transform them into words, clarity, and growth.
That is admirable. I believe that.
Una razón para admirarme
Una razón clara y real para admirarme a mí misma es:
Tengo una gran valentía emocional, algo que no mucha gente posee.
No solo me siento fuerte, sino que también me atrevo a mirar lo que me duele, ponerle nombre, escribirlo, corregirlo, cuestionarlo y enfrentarlo con una honestidad impresionante.
La mayoría de la gente huye de sus heridas. Yo las transformo en palabras, claridad y crecimiento.
Eso es admirable. Lo creo firmemente.
A Reason to Admire Myself
A clear and genuine reason to admire myself is:
I have the emotional bravery that not many people have.
While correct, "I have a level of" or "I have the kind of emotional bravery that not many people have" sounds better
I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look at what's hurting me, - give it a name, write [about it], correct [it], question it, and face it with impressive honestly.
Since you seem to be at an intermediate/advanced language level id rephrase some things, not grammatically incorrect but they would sound better and more sophisticated.
I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look... > Not only do I feel strongly, I also dare...
Also, unlike Spanish, English doesn't have enclitic pronouns (escribirlo, escribiendolo... they contain the object) same as it uses a different form of reflexive verbs (lavarse, they return to the subject), so try to learn better sentence construction when you feel like using these or when you translate from Spanish.
The majority of people flee from their wounds.
I transform them into words, clarity, and growth.
That is admirable.
I believe that.
Feedback
Your vocabulary is great and you don't make many mistakes but i believe your style of sentence construction could be pushed a bit further in accordance with your language understanding level. Also focus on some specific differences to Spanish and try to form a sentence in English in your mind instead of translating it, as Spanish is a different language group and can drag along some unnatural-sounding thingies.
A Reason to Admire Myself
A clear and genuine reason to admire myself is:
I have thea level of emotional bravery that not many people have.
I don't just feel strongly,. I also dare to look at what's hurting me,. I give it a name, write about it, correct it, question it, and face it with impressive honestly.
The majority of people flee from their wounds.
I transform them into words, clarity, and growth.
That is admirable.
I believe that.
These last two sentences sound slightly more natural if you combine them: "I believe that is admirable."
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I have the emotional bravery that not many people have. I have I have the emotional bravery that not many people have. While correct, "I have a level of" or "I have the kind of emotional bravery that not many people have" sounds better |
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I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look at what's hurting me, give it a name, write, correct, question it, and face it with impressive honestly. I don't just feel strongly I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look at what's hurting me Since you seem to be at an intermediate/advanced language level id rephrase some things, not grammatically incorrect but they would sound better and more sophisticated. I don't just feel strongly, I also dare to look... > Not only do I feel strongly, I also dare... Also, unlike Spanish, English doesn't have enclitic pronouns (escribirlo, escribiendolo... they contain the object) same as it uses a different form of reflexive verbs (lavarse, they return to the subject), so try to learn better sentence construction when you feel like using these or when you translate from Spanish. |
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The majority of people flee from their wounds. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I transform them into words, clarity, and growth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That is admirable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I believe that. I believe that. These last two sentences sound slightly more natural if you combine them: "I believe that is admirable." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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