Sept. 18, 2020
After more than half year!
Our library is finally re-open again.
For the last six months I just keep reading from my tablet.
Well, I did learn new knowledge.
But siting in library reading books is a too different experience.
Library is for poor me like me.
Enjoy air condition in hot summer.
Reading all kinds book and free wi-fi limitless.
However, government still concern the public safety.
The library only open 1pm to 8pm, Monday to Saturday.
I hope someday they will open like a -7-11.
I do think the whole world will agree my suggestion.
A real book in my hand
Our library is finally re-open again.
“Open again” and “reopen” mean the same thing. They shouldn’t be combined unless you want to emphasize that it’s the reopening that is happening again.
For the last six months I just keept reading fromon my tablet.
Well, I did learn new knowledgethings.
One doesn’t really “learn knowledge.” “Gain knowledge” or “learn new things” should be used.
But sitting in the library reading books is a toovery different experience.
“Too” applied to an adjective has a negative meaning.
Generally, the consonant should be doubled if there is a vowel right before it and the vowel is a short sound (doesn’t sound like the letter name).
“Hop” becomes “hopping.”
“Hope” becomes “hoping.”
“Honk” becomes “honking” because there are two consonants after the last vowel.
Library is for poor mpeople like me.
Enjoy air condition in hot summer.
This is a fragment and needs to be combined with the previous sentence. I don’t think it is here justified for stylistic reasons.
Reading all kinds book and free wi-fi limitless.
Again, this is a fragment.
However, government is still concern ed withe public safety.
“A concerns B” means either that 1) B is worried about A or 2) a question about A involves B.
You can also write “the government concerns itself with public safety.”
The library only open from 1pm to 8pm, Monday to Saturday.
I hope that someday they will open like a -7-11.
It seems better to include “that” if the clause introduced does not start with the subject.
I do think the whole world will agree my suggestion.
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However, government still concern the public safety. However, government is still concern “A concerns B” means either that 1) B is worried about A or 2) a question about A involves B. You can also write “the government concerns itself with public safety.” |
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A real book in my hand This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After more than half year! |
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Our library is finally re-open again. Our library is finally “Open again” and “reopen” mean the same thing. They shouldn’t be combined unless you want to emphasize that it’s the reopening that is happening again. |
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For the last six months I just keep reading from my tablet. For the last six months I just ke |
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Well, I did learn new knowledge. Well, I did learn new One doesn’t really “learn knowledge.” “Gain knowledge” or “learn new things” should be used. |
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But siting in library reading books is a too different experience. But sitting in the library reading books is a “Too” applied to an adjective has a negative meaning. Generally, the consonant should be doubled if there is a vowel right before it and the vowel is a short sound (doesn’t sound like the letter name). “Hop” becomes “hopping.” “Hope” becomes “hoping.” “Honk” becomes “honking” because there are two consonants after the last vowel. |
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Library is for poor me like me. Library is for poor |
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Enjoy air condition in hot summer. Enjoy air condition in hot summer. This is a fragment and needs to be combined with the previous sentence. I don’t think it is here justified for stylistic reasons. |
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Reading all kinds book and free wi-fi limitless. Reading all kinds book and free wi-fi limitless. Again, this is a fragment. |
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The library only open 1pm to 8pm, Monday to Saturday. The library only open from 1pm to 8pm, Monday to Saturday. |
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I hope someday they will open like a -7-11. I hope that someday they will open like a It seems better to include “that” if the clause introduced does not start with the subject. |
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I do think the whole world will agree my suggestion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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