June 17, 2022
A rattled bus
A rattled and shabby bus is riding a road of countryside.
All I can see are rice fields.
I have to sing a country song because I live in a countryside.
Where is mama?
She lives in a city.
She hates a countryside because she grew up in a countryside.
But I like countryside because here is where I live.
Is it rhythmical enough to make a country song? Haha.
A rattled bus
A rattled and shabby bus is dridving a road oflong the countryside. / A rattled and shabby bus is driving on the countryside road.
All I can see are rice fields.
I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside.
Where is mama?
She lives in a city.
She hates athe countryside because she grew up in a countrysidthere.
Your sentence is correct but using "countryside" twice sounds repetitive. This sounds more natural. :)
But I like countryside because here is where I live.
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Great job! :)
A rattled bus
A rattled and shabby bus is dridving on a road ofin the countryside.
All I can see are rice fields.
I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside.
Where is mama?
She lives in athe city.
She hates a countryside because she grew up in athe countryside.
But I like the countryside because hereit is where I live.
June 18, 2022
Thank you:D
A rattled and shabby bus is riding a road of countrysiderides along a county road.
Or: the bus is riding along a road in the country. Or: the bus is riding along the countryside. We wouldn't say riding a road, but we do say riding a horse.
I have to sing a country song because I live in athe countryside.
Country can be used to describe an actual country like Canada or Germany, and can also describe the land that isn't urbanized.
She hates athe countryside because she grew up in a countrysidthere.
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Sounds poetic!
June 18, 2022
Thank you :D
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