June 9, 2020
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My main concern at the moment is the lack of consistency in production and distribution of medical supplies to our doctors and nurses in neighboring cities. They have been waiting for almost two months, and yet there is still no sign of our products in their hospitals. Such situation should not have arisen in the first place if we were a competent and reliable company. Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need are still stored in our warehouse? No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all of the staffs. A neat solution for a dire problem indeed. Thank you.
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My main concern at the moment is the lack of consistency in production and distribution of medical supplies to our doctors and nurses in neighboring cities.
They have been waiting for almost two months, and yet there is still no sign of our products in their hospitals.
Such situations should not have arisen in the first place, if we were a competent and reliable company.
Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need areis still stored in our warehouse?
No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all of the staffs.
A neat solution for a dire problem indeed.
Thank you.
June 10, 2020
Hi, Jack_MN. Thank you for your correction.
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My main concern at the moment is the lack of consistency in the production and distribution of medical supplies to our doctors and nurses in neighboring cities.
They have been waiting for almost two months, and yet there is still no sign of our products in their hospitals.
SuchA situation shlike this would notever have arisen in the first place if we were a competent and reliable company.
Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need areis still stored in our warehouse?
No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all of the staffs.
A neat solution for a dire problem indeed.
Thank you.
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June 9, 2020
Hi Gingerbreadwoman, thank you for your corrections. Appreciate it a lot!
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My main concern at the moment is the lack of consistency in production and distribution of medical supplies to our doctors and nurses in neighboring cities. My main concern at the moment is the lack of consistency in the production and distribution of medical supplies to our doctors and nurses in neighboring cities. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They have been waiting for almost two months, and yet there is still no sign of our products in their hospitals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Such situation should not have arisen in the first place if we were a competent and reliable company.
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Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need are still stored in our warehouse? Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need Who is to blame when people are dying because the medicine they badly need |
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No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all of the staffs. No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all No one likes to be blamed, so to avoid that I will officially close this company and dismiss all of the staff |
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