May 5, 2024
A Rainy Day
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run. After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again. Your help was very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
雨天
今早一直下雨，到11点左右才停。
我穿上跑鞋去跑步。40分钟之后有下起了雨，我不得不立马回家了。
据说，下雨天是读书天，所以我又回顾了这周的笔记和大家的修正。非常感谢大家的帮助。
谢谢！
A Rainy Day
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock/11 AM/11:00.
There are many ways to write 11:00. Depending on where you are, you can write the time differently. In the United States, you can write it as 11 o'clock or 11:00 AM. I'm unsure for other English-speaking countries that use the 24 hour system instead of the 12 hour system.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
I made your corrections to use a more inclusive pronoun.
Your help was very muchI would appreciate your help./Your help is appreciated.
I changed your sentence to use an active voice. You can use a passive voice for your sentence, but use it sparingly.
Thank you so much!
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Hope you had fun in your run despite the rain.
A Rainy Day
It started raineding this morning and then it stopped at around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go backreturn home immediately.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
May 5, 2024
Thank you for the corrections!
A Rainy Day
A rainy day- no need to capitalise every word
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
May 5, 2024
Thank you！
Have a nice weekend!
A Rainy Day
It started raineding this morning and stopped at around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
I think 40 minutes doesn't count as "immediately"; immediately makes me think that it started raining once you left your house, lol
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
Feedback
I'm glad you're so dedicated to your hobbies!
May 5, 2024
Thank you！
Have a nice weekend!
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