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There is something in my mind these days, and I hope you guys can resolve it or maybe give an opinion about it. I love videogames since I was a child, I spend like third time of the day playing with friends and having fun, although, I only play multiplayer games, because I think the best part of games is interacting with other people around the world and having different experiences. However, the question I want to ask, specially for those who are gamers is, Do you guys think that playing multiplayer games can help to improve your English skills? I mean, we usually meet knew people that doesn´t talk your language, and it is fun because you try to communicate with them and understand what they are saying, so I think it is a good way to practice and meeting knew people that maybe can help you to improve. I'm also asking that because you know, many people say that videogames is waste of time or that you need to find a better hobbie, but if what I'm saying is true, it would mean that games are probably one of the most usefull hobbies.
What you guys think?
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I'm here to give my opinion. I had a young student who was learning English as a second language. He didn't like to read books, and he was a quiet kid in school. But his dad told me that he watched his son play multiplayer video games, and he was amazed at his son's leadership skills and how he communicated with the other players and organized what they would do. So, I would say the opportunities are there, and it sounds like you already know that!
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"I have" sounds better.
There is something ion my mind these days, and I hope you guys can resolve it or maybe give an opinion about it.
"On my mind" sounds better in English, this is typically what would be spoken.
I have loved videogames since I was a child, I spendplay like thirdree time of the day playings every day with friends and having fun, although, I only play multiplayer games, because I think the best part of games is interacting with other people around the world and having different experiences.
"I have" must become past tense, as you "have loved" them since childhood. The revised sentence structure in the second sentence sounds better in English, although difficult to explain why. The rest is solid.
However, the question I want to ask, specially for those who are gamers is,
Do you guys think that playing multiplayer games can help to improve your English skills?
I mean, we usually meet knew people that doesn´t taln't speak your language, and it is fun because you try to communicate with them and understand what they are saying, so I think it is a good way to practice and meeting k new people that maybe can help you to improve.
"New" would be correct in this scenario as "knew" is the past tense of the verb "to know". "Speak" sounds better in this context. "Don't" is the correction contraction in this case. "Meet" sounds better here.
I'm also asking that because you know, many people say that videogames isare a waste of time or that you need to find a better hobbiey, but if what I'm saying is true, it would mean that games are probably one of the most usefull hobbies.
A different conjugation of the verb "to be" is required after videogames because they are plural. Hobby is spelled incorrectly. Useful is also spelled incorrectly.
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Adding have because the rest of the text implies you still have the question.
There is something in my mind these days, and I hope you guys can resolve it or maybe give an opinion about it.
I have loved video games since I was a child, I spend like a third time of the day playing with friends and having fun, a. Although, I only play multiplayer games, because I think the best part of games is interacting with other people around the world and having different experiences.
You did love video games, and you still do.
Better as two sentences.
However, the question I want to ask, specially for those who are gamers is, :
Do you guys think that playing multiplayer games can help to improve your English skills?
I mean, we usually meet knew people that doesn´t talk in your language, and it is fun because you try to communicate with them and understand what they are saying, so I think it is a good way to practice and meeting k new people that maybe can help you to improve.
Or "don't speak your language"
I'm also asking that because you know, many people say that video games isare a waste of time or that you need to find a better hobbie, by. But if what I'm saying is true, it would mean that games are probably one of the most usefull hobbies.
What you guys think?
Feedback
Few mistakes, nicely done.
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There is something in my mind these days, and I hope you guys can resolve it or maybe give an opinion about it.
I've loved videogames since I was a child,; I spend like a third time of the day playing with friends and having fun, although, I only play multiplayer games, because I think the best part of games is interacting with other people around the world and having different experiences.
However, the question I want to ask, specially for those who are gamers is,
Do you guys think that playing multiplayer games can help to improve your English skills?
Some might say not to use "to" after help. Don't listen to them. It is optional, though, to use "to."
I mean, we usually meet knew people that doesn´t talwho don't speak your language, and it is fun because you try to communicate with them and understand what they are saying, so I think it is a good way to practice and meeting knew people thatwho can maybe can help you to improve.
I'm also asking that because, you know, many people say that videogames isare waste of time or that you need to find a better hobbiey, but if what I'm saying is true, it would mean that games are probably one of the most usefull hobbies.
What you guys think?
Feedback
I think that the usefulness of videogames is entirely dependent on how you communicate with the people. I'm not a gamer myself, so I don't really know much about how that works. I will say that it is definitely agreed that communicating with people is THE way to progress. If video games are how you do that, then I think that that is probably extremely useful. Your English is pretty good, so it must be working for you!
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I mean, we usually meet knew people that doesn´t talk your language, and it is fun because you try to communicate with them and understand what they are saying, so I think it is a good way to practice and meeting knew people that maybe can help you to improve. I mean, we usually meet knew people I mean, we usually meet knew people that do Or "don't speak your language" I mean, we usually meet "New" would be correct in this scenario as "knew" is the past tense of the verb "to know". "Speak" sounds better in this context. "Don't" is the correction contraction in this case. "Meet" sounds better here. |
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