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fraurosemary

Dec. 6, 2020

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Here is the sentence: “An app created for the purpose leads walkers from starting point to finish by means of a chain of photos, each image taking over from where the previous one leaves off.”
I wander that can the word “taking” in the sentence be replaced by “is taken” ?

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Here is the sentence: “An app created for the purpose of leadsing walkers from starting point A to finishpoint B by means of a chain of photos, each image taking over from where the previous one leaves off.”

Unsure of the origin of this sentence but as it did not read naturally to me I corrected it - specifically "for the purpose of"

Start-finish sounds like a race so I thought point A and point B would be better

I waonder that canif the word “taking” in the sentence can be replaced by “is taken” ?

I would say that the word "taking" can be replaced by "takes" if you split it into two sentences

"An app created for the purpose of leading walkers from point A to point B by means of a chain of photos. Each image takes over from where the previous one leaves off.”

I don't know the technical reason why, but I think it's because "takes" and "taking" have more of an active voice than "is taken" which is passive

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fraurosemary

Dec. 15, 2020

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Thanks a lot!

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Here is the sentence: “An app created for the purpose leads walkers from starting point to finish by means of a chain of photos, each image taking over from where the previous one leaves off.”


Here is the sentence: “An app created for the purpose of leadsing walkers from starting point A to finishpoint B by means of a chain of photos, each image taking over from where the previous one leaves off.”

Unsure of the origin of this sentence but as it did not read naturally to me I corrected it - specifically "for the purpose of" Start-finish sounds like a race so I thought point A and point B would be better

I wander that can the word “taking” in the sentence be replaced by “is taken” ?


I waonder that canif the word “taking” in the sentence can be replaced by “is taken” ?

I would say that the word "taking" can be replaced by "takes" if you split it into two sentences "An app created for the purpose of leading walkers from point A to point B by means of a chain of photos. Each image takes over from where the previous one leaves off.” I don't know the technical reason why, but I think it's because "takes" and "taking" have more of an active voice than "is taken" which is passive

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