Jan. 27, 2020
A Pusher
I want to beef up my heart, There are always some rumors swirling around. I knew all along it was who that wants to play the company like a violin. I am the one who has upstaged the guy. I want to him to behave more like a man. I suppose that he thinks I am a kind of his brethren. What I have been doing is by sheer force of habit. I am more like a mascot to my co-workers. My lines could make sense. Actually, I see him as a pusher. I get riled up whenever I see him.
I want to beef up my heart,. There are always some rumors swirling around.
"I want to beef up my heart" sounds unnatural. I am not sure what you are trying to say here, but I would guess you want to express that you would like to strengthen your heart or harden your heart.
I knew all along it was who that wants to play the company like a violin.
This entire sentence is unclear. I can understand that someone is playing the company like a violin, but I am not sure who you are talking about.
I suppose that he thinks I am a kindpart of his brethren.
You can either say "part of his brethen" or "one of his kind." However, they should not be combined like how you did in the sentence.
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Overall, your entry is jumbled and full of mixed statements and could use more clarity in your explanations. However, good job and keep on studying! :)
I want to him to behave more like a man.
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All in all, I could understand the gist of the text but there were some metaphors that were hard for me to understand. For example, “ I want to beef up my heart”. Could you perhaps mean that, you would like to harden your heart?
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I want to beef up my heart, There are always some rumors swirling around. I want to beef up my heart "I want to beef up my heart" sounds unnatural. I am not sure what you are trying to say here, but I would guess you want to express that you would like to strengthen your heart or harden your heart. |
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I knew all along it was who that wants to play the company like a violin. I knew all along it was who that wants to play the company like a violin. This entire sentence is unclear. I can understand that someone is playing the company like a violin, but I am not sure who you are talking about. |
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I am the one who has upstaged the guy. |
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I want to him to behave more like a man. I want |
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I suppose that he thinks I am a kind of his brethren. I suppose that he thinks I am a You can either say "part of his brethen" or "one of his kind." However, they should not be combined like how you did in the sentence. |
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What I have been doing is by sheer force of habit. |
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I am more like a mascot to my co-workers. |
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My lines could make sense. |
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Actually, I see him as a pusher. |
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I get riled up whenever I see him. |
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