Nov. 12, 2020
A poem
She is all alone
like no one in this world is, or will ever be.
No messages on her phone, no missed calls
No one thinks about her, or at least that's what she knows,
that's what she repeats to herself, over and over.
Life isn't supposed to be this hard
but she can't find a way out of this maze
where she finds herself in
every day
Her thoughts are too intense.
The surface is unbearable.
Her heart is so naive.
When we can't sleep
we spend the night wondering in different universes
and lately, she has been away
creating her own reality in order to survive.
A poem
She is all alone
like no one in this world is, or ever will ever be.
No messages on her phone, no missed calls
No one thinks about her, or at least that's what she knows,
that's what she repeats to herself, over and over.
Life isn't supposed to be like this hard
but she can't find a way out of this maze
where she finds herself in
Another way to word this that sounds more natural is, "that she has found herself in".
every day
Her thoughts are too intense.
The surface is unbearable.
Her heart is so naive.
When we can't sleep
we spend the night wondering in different universes
and lately, she has been away
creating her own reality in order to survive.
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She is all alone This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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like no one in this world is, or will ever be. like no one in this world is |
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No one thinks about her, or at least that's what she knows, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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that's what she repeats to herself, over and over. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Life isn't supposed to be like this hard This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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but she can't find a way out of this maze This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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where she finds herself in where she finds herself in Another way to word this that sounds more natural is, "that she has found herself in". |
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every day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Her thoughts are too intense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The surface is unbearable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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we spend the night wondering in different universes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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and lately, she has been away This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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creating her own reality in order to survive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Life isn't supposed to be this hard |
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