A Pleassant Feel-good Movie and a Holidays

'Pleasant' only has 1 's'👍

Evening SundayOn Sunday evening, I saw a curious movie, about music, hope, friendship, and life, that was filmed in and around London.

It liooked a lot like a version of "The Rising Sun", with a touch of "Techno".

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I spent a nice time watching " I Used to Be Famous".

A Pleassant Feel-good Movie and a Holidays

EveningOn Sunday evening, I saw a curious movie, about music, hope, friendship, and life, tha. It was filmed in and around London.

I liked a lot areally liked this version of "The Rising Sun", withas it had a touch of Techno.

I switched "a" for "this". It isn't incorrect to use "a". However, because you're already discussing the movie, you should opt for "this" as it refers to a subject already being discussed in conversation.

I also switched "with" for "as it had". This makes it sound like you're explaining why you liked it, with the touch of Techno supporting that overall conclusion.

There are also some scenes filmed at Hastings, that remember. They reminded me aof holidays I spent in thisat beautiful city ofin the South of England.

This time, I switched "this" for "that". I recommend practicing with these pronouns (a, this, that, the), as the differences in their usage are subtle.

I spentalso had a nice time watching " I Used to Be Famous".

A Pleassant Feel-gGood Movie and a Holidays

Evening SundaySunday evening I saw a curious movie, about music, hope, friendship, and life, that was filmed in and around London.

Choose one ^ i would avoid ‘and’ listing as it makes writing in general sound clunky.

I liked a lot a, especially, the version of "The Rising Sun", withas it had a touch of Techno.

‘As it had’ > justification phrase

There awere also some scenes filmed at Hastings, that remember meinded me of a holidays I spent in this beautiful city of the South of England.

Saw movie in the past = talk about it in the past

‘Reminded me of’ << this is always the correct phrase

Remember and remind are not interchangeable. Remind = recall, recollect. Remember = to remember something specific/in general e.g “i remembered that I forgot to shut my door”. Think of remember = technical, remind = feeling, emotional events etc!

I spent a nice time watching " I Used to Be Famous"t was nice. / I had a great/good time watching it.

A Pleassant Feel-gGood Movie and athe Holidays

"a holidays" is not correct usage.

Evening SundaySunday evening, I saw a curious movie, about music, hope, friendship, and life, that was filmed in and around London.

I liked a lot athe version of "The Rising Sun", with a touch of Techno a lot.

"[W]ith a touch of Techno" is an essential clause, meaning it is necessary for the sentence to make sense. With such clauses, you do not use commas to set them off. It's "the version" and not "a version" because you're talking specifically about the version in the movie. Alternatively, you can also say something like "The movie featured a version of 'The Rising Sun' with a touch of Techno, which I liked a lot."

There are also some scenes filmed at Hastings, that remember me awhich remind me of when I used to spend the holidays I spent in this beautiful city of the South ofern England.

You do not use "that" for nonessential clauses.

I spenthad a nice time watching " I Used to Be Famous".

Note that in American English, the period goes inside the quotes, but I am assuming you are learning British English (or some other Commonwealth variety).