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Tammy

May 27, 2024

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A Pleasant Little Thing

I got home a few minutes ago and want to share a pleasant little thing with you.

There is a pot of gardenia on my windowsill. It's with several buds right now.

I just found out that one of the buds is going to bloom.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

So happy!


才回家,想跟你们分享一件开心的小事。

我窗台上有一盆栀子花,现在有很多花苞了。

我刚发现其中一个花苞要绽开了。

可能明早起来,就可以看到一朵花花啦。

开心!

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A Pleasant Little Thing

I got home a few minutes ago and want to share a pleasant little thing with you.

There is a pot of gardenia on my windowsill.

It's with has several buds right now.

I just found out that one of the buds is going to bloom.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

SI’m so happy!

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That sounds really nice! Good job with the sentences too!

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Tammy

May 29, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Have a nice day!

I got home a few minutes ago and wanted to share a pleasant little thing with you.

NOTE: The past tense should be used here.

ALSO POSSIBLE: There is a pot ofwith gardenia on my windowsill.

It's withCLEARER: It has several buds right now.

ALSO POSSIBLE: I just found out that one of the buds is going towill bloom soon.

Maybe I will see athis flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

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Nice! Seeing a flower is a small source. Seeing a flower wilt can also remind that all things are fleeting.

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Tammy

May 28, 2024

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Thank you for the corrections and feedback.

It's with has several buds right now.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

or "a blossom" or a "blossoming flower"

SI'm so happy!

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What a lovely moment!

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Tammy

May 28, 2024

1

Thank you so much!

A Pleasant Little Thing

I got home a few minutes ago and wanted to share a pleasant little thing with you.

There is a pot of gardenia pot on my windowsill.

Or: gardenias in a pot

It's with has several buds right now.

I just found out that one of the buds is going to bloom.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

SI'm so happy!

Feedback

Good luck! I hope you see one tomorrow :)

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Tammy

May 28, 2024

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Thank you!

Yes, it was. But the flower had just bloomed a little when I left home this morning.

A Pleasant Little Thing

I got home a few minutes ago and want to share a pleasant little thing with you.

There is a pot of gardenia on my windowsill.

It's with has several buds right now.

I just found out that one of the buds is going to bloom.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

SI'm so happy!

Feedback

Thanks for sharing such a cute story! Well done

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Tammy

May 28, 2024

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Thank you so much!

A Pleasant Little Thing


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I got home a few minutes ago and want to share a pleasant little thing with you.


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I got home a few minutes ago and wanted to share a pleasant little thing with you.

I got home a few minutes ago and wanted to share a pleasant little thing with you.

NOTE: The past tense should be used here.

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There is a pot of gardenia on my windowsill.


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There is a pot of gardenia pot on my windowsill.

Or: gardenias in a pot

ALSO POSSIBLE: There is a pot ofwith gardenia on my windowsill.

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It's with several buds right now.


It's with has several buds right now.

It's with has several buds right now.

It's with has several buds right now.

It's withCLEARER: It has several buds right now.

It's with has several buds right now.

I just found out that one of the buds is going to bloom.


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ALSO POSSIBLE: I just found out that one of the buds is going towill bloom soon.

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Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.


Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

or "a blossom" or a "blossoming flower"

Maybe I will see athis flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

Maybe I will see a flower in a blossom when I get up tomorrow morning.

So happy!


SI'm so happy!

SI'm so happy!

SI'm so happy!

SI’m so happy!

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