Nov. 19, 2024
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
I went to a scenic area on Saturday.
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history. The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty. You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik
It was the third time I've been there.
The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago. At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.
The second time was one year ago. It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.
上周六我去了一个风景区。
它以银杏树而闻名，那些银杏树有着悠久的历史。最古老的是1500多年前种植的，甚至比著名的唐朝还要早100年。你可以在视频开头找到它：https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik
这是我第三次去那里了。
我第一次去那里是很多年前和两个朋友家一起去的。那时，我们专门去那里喝春天的新茶。
第二次是在一年前。它就在一条徒步路线的尽头。
这一次，我和一个朋友一起去看银杏树的黄叶。
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
MORE PRECISELY: I went to a scenic area in **** province on Saturday.
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.
The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.
ALSO POSSIBLE: You can find it at the beginning of this video: at https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik
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Thanks for sharing the video, Tammy.
Nov. 20, 2024
You're welcome and Thank you for the corrections!
Have a nice day!
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
I went to a scenic area on Saturday. (or "last Saturday")
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.
The oldest one was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty by 100 years.
You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.
The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago.
At that time, we went there specifically to drink the fresh tea in the spring.
The second time was one year ago.
It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.
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Great job! The ginkgo trees look lovely. I don't think I've ever seen one in person!
Nov. 20, 2024
Thank you very much!
Welcome to come to China someday and see the ginkgo trees. They grow in many provinces in China.
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This time, I visitedwent with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.
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你的英语水平已经挺高的，没有什么大的错误。其他人已经给你纠正了。我就是建议地道的表达而已！
Nov. 20, 2024
谢谢你！
Have a nice day!
A Place ReKnowned for its Ginkgo Trees
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I went to a scenic area on Saturday.
The first time I visitedwent there was with two friends' families many years ago.
Another way to put it
The second time was one year ago.
It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.
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Well-done 💯
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
I went to a scenic area on Saturday.
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.
The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.
You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.
The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago.
At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.
To make your writing feel more personal (because it's a personal recount), you must write more about how you felt during these actions
It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
It was at the end of a hiking trail.
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Great job
Nov. 19, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
I went to a scenic area on Saturday.
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history.
The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty.
You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik It was the third time I've been there.
The first time I visited there was with two friends' and their families many years ago.
At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.
The second time was one year ago.
It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees withand their yellow leaves.
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Very good writing!
Nov. 19, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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