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Huynh_Vy12

Aug. 14, 2025

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a place i like

Hanoi was wonderful when I was a child. I went to Hanoi last year. Hanoi is an ancient city. It brings beauty, modern and ancient. In the evening, lights are brightening to show that wonderful beauty. I went to Hanoi to visit Ba Dinh Square, take photos, and eat delicious dishes. Season I go to Hanoi because Hanoi has Uncle. I went to Hanoi. I hope I will go to Hanoi when I grow up. I love Hanoi. I love Vietnam.

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a pA Place i lI Like

Title Case, plus I is always capitalized in English

Hanoi was wonderful when I was a child.

I went to Hanoi last year.

Hanoi is an ancient city.

It brings beauty, modern and ancient.

In the evening, lights are brightening to show that wonderful beauty.

I went to Hanoi to visit Ba Dinh Square, take photos, and eat delicious dishes.

SThe reason I go to Hanoi is because Hanoi has Unclmy uncle lives there.

I think this is what you meant?

I went to Hanoi.

I would remove, since you already stated this.

I hope I will go to Hanoi when I grow up.

I love Hanoi.

I love Vietnam.

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Overall this is pretty clear, with straightforward sentences. To challenge yourself, you could try varying your sentence structure more!

a place i like


a pA Place i lI Like

Title Case, plus I is always capitalized in English

Hanoi was wonderful when I was a child.


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I went to Hanoi last year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hanoi is an ancient city.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It brings beauty, modern and ancient.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the evening, lights are brightening to show that wonderful beauty.


In the evening, lights are brightening to show that wonderful beauty.

I went to Hanoi to visit Ba Dinh Square, take photos, and eat delicious dishes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Season I go to Hanoi because Hanoi has Uncle.


SThe reason I go to Hanoi is because Hanoi has Unclmy uncle lives there.

I think this is what you meant?

I went to Hanoi.


I went to Hanoi.

I would remove, since you already stated this.

I hope I will go to Hanoi when I grow up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love Hanoi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love Vietnam.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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