May 6, 2024
A piece of news about China's domestic tourism
Although 2024 is not yet half over, China's domestic travel market has clearly emerged from the downturn of the past few years.
According to data released by the data center of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism, the cumulative number of travelers reached 119 million, which has recovered to 106% of the level in 2019.
The revenue brought by tourism is also very impressive, which has recovered to 53.95 billion yuan in 2024, an increase of 12.7% over the same period in 2019. Cultural tourism consumption has basically recovered to the pre-epidemic level, surpassing 2019 for the first time in nearly three years.
一则关于中国国内旅游的新闻
2024年虽然尚未过去一半，但是旅游市场已经明显走出过去数年的低迷。
文旅部数据中心发布的数据显示，累计出游人数达到1.19亿人，已经恢复至2019年106%的水平。
旅游业带来的收入也十分可观，2024年已经恢复至539.5亿元，较2019年同期增长12.7%。文旅消费已经基本回升至疫情前水平，近三年来首次超过2019年。
A piece ofSome news about China's domestic tourism
“A piece of news” is unnatural. You could say “an item of news” but this would put too much emphasis on the “item”—I would expect your post to describe a specific news story that was published somewhere.
“Chinese Domestic Tourism News” would also work as a title.
Although 2024 is not yet half over, China's domestic travel market has clearly emerged from the downturn of the past few years.
According to data released by the data center of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism, the cumulative number of travelers reached 119 million, which has recovered to 106% of the level (during the same period) in 2019.
Technically, you could be comparing the first few months of 2024 to the ENTIRE 12 months of 2019, but I assume you’re comparing to the same period in 2019. If the data is specifically for the first 3 months (the first quarter) of each year, you could say so.
The revenue brought by tourism is also very impressive, which hashaving recovered to 53.95 billion yuan in 2024, an increase of 12.7% over the same period in 2019.
Cultural tourism consumption has basically recovered [to the pre-epidemic level | to pre-pandemic levels], surpassing 2019 for the first time in nearly three years.
Logically, “in nearly three years” seems a bit odd to me. It implies that sometime slightly less than three years ago (that is to say, in early 2021), cultural tourism spending surpassed 2019 levels. Can this be right—wasn’t this type of spending lower in 2021 due to the pandemic?
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You used the verb “recovered” three time in the last three sentences. We generally try to avoid this sort of repetition in English writing because it sounds “boring” to our ears.
May 6, 2024
Thank you for the corrections and feedback! I learned a lot from them.
May 7, 2024
You’re welcome. I’m still curious about the “近三年来首次超过2019年” part, though. Did spending during some time period in 2021 really surpass the corresponding period in 2019?
May 7, 2024
“近三年”=2022, 2023 and 2024
May 7, 2024
Did my expression make you misunderstand?
May 8, 2024
In your English version, you wrote “in nearly three years” (将近三年). Are you saying that you meant “in the past three years” (这三年以来) ?
May 8, 2024
Oh, I see, they are not the same thing. "In the past three years" is the proper expression.
A piece of news about China's domestic tourism
Although 2024 is not yet half over, China's domestic travel market has clearly emerged from the downturn of the past few years.
It would be good if you cited this statistic with a link. Otherwise, you wrote this sentence well and used a proper citation.
According to data released by the data center of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism, the cumulative number of travelers reached 119 million, which has recovered to 106% of the level in 2019.
The revenue brought by tourism is also very impressive, which. It has recovered to 53.95 billion yuan in 2024, an increase of 12.7% over the same period in 2019.
I wonder where you got these statistics.
Cultural tourism consumption has basically recovered to the pre-epidemic level, surpassing 2019 for the first time in nearly three years.
Where have you learned this information? Also, I made your sentence sounds more natural in the context of an essay.
May 6, 2024
Thank you for the corrections and feedback!
Don't worry about the numbers. I'm here to learn English, not to edit an encyclopedia.
May 7, 2024
It makes sense. I'm curious where you found these sources, out of sheer curiosity.
May 7, 2024
Oh, you can find the news here:https://www.cbndata.com/information/292538, for more information, you can check on the website of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism
A piece of news about China's domestic tourism
Although 2024 is not yet half over, China's domestic travel market has clearly emerged from the downturn of the past few years.
According to data released by the data center of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism, the cumulative number of travelers reached 119 million, which has recovered to 106% of the level in 2019.
The revenue brought by tourism is also very impressive, which has recovered to 53.95 billion yuan in 2024, an increase of 12.7% over the same period in 2019.
Cultural tourism consumption has basically recovered to the pre-epidemic level, surpassing 2019 for the first time in nearly three years.
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I went to China in 2024 too lol, though I didn't see a lot of other foreigners (well, not Caucasians, at least).
May 6, 2024
Wow, which cities did you go to?
There are more and more foreigners in Shanghai recently.
May 8, 2024
I went to Beijing, Shanghai, and Shenyang. It was a lot of fun! I was surprised at how many Western elements there were in Shanghai!
May 8, 2024
Yes, Shanghai was once a concession to several countries during the terrible weak time of China.
June 18, 2024
Ah, I see!
A piece ofSome news about China's domestic tourism
Although 2024 is not yet half over yet, China's domestic travel market has clearly emerged from the downturn of the past few years.
According to data released by the data center of the Ministry of Culture and Tourism, the cumulative number of travelers reached 119 million, which has recoverached to 106% of the level in 2019.
The revenue brought by tourism is also very impressive, which has recoverached to 53.95 billion yuan in 2024, an increase of 12.7% over the same period in 2019.
Cultural tourism consumption has basically recovered to the pre-epidemic level, surpassing 2019 for the first time in nearly three years.
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Fantastic! I would love to visit one day :)
May 6, 2024
Thank you and welcome!
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