A phone call = I am worthy

"I am" can also be "I'm"

Today I received a phone call, can that makde me cry (inside).

(Inside)

This would go inside the sentence, not outside the period.

Between 2014-2017 I was working inorked for a company.

That was one of my highest career history highlights.

I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit…

UBut unfortunately, I also makde a terrible mistake.

So, the boss fired me aton Chinese New Year e's Eve.

For people who don’t know, if you getting fire atd on such date that i, it's considered an insult.

Anyway, 3 1/2 years pastsed.

Today, a customer callsed me to come to his office and collect a pay chequesck.

Hey you foolish Bboss!

You fired me 3 ½ years ago but, your customer still thinks I am working for you.

You can say "I'm" instead of "I am".

WDo you want to hire me again?

That was one of mythe highest career historypoints of my career.

It sounds more natural without the word "history" after "career."

Today I received a phone call, can that makde me cry.

That was one of mythe highest points in my career history.

I helped this company gain new business, customers and profit…

Make sure to stick with past tense in the past.

Unfortunately I also makde a terrible mistake.

So, the boss fired me aton Chinese New Year e's Eve.

For peoplthose who don’t know, if you getting fire atd on such date tha date is considered an insult.

Anyway, 3 1/2 years pastsed.

Today, a customer callsed me to come to his office and collect a pay chequesck.

Hey you foolish Bboss!

You fired me 3 ½ years ago but your customer still thinks I am working for you.