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Tsuki

Jan. 10, 2025

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A pet

I want to raise a pet again. I would like to have a cat or a dog. They look so cute.
When I was children, I raised duck, rooster and a cat. But they died very early. So I felt sadly at that time.
Now I grown up, I can begin to accept death.


我又想养个宠物了,想养只猫或者狗,感觉它们很可爱。
小时候我养过鸭子、公鸡、小猫,但是它们去世得很早,所以那时候我哭得很伤心。
现在我长大了,我开始可以接受死亡。

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When I was a children, I raised a duck, a rooster and a cat.

"children" is for more than one child.

So I felt sadly at that time.

Now I(that) I've grown up, I can begin to accept death.

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I've also considered getting a pet, but I'm not sure I'd trust myself to look after one well enough.

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Tsuki

Jan. 11, 2025

20

Yes, but the pet is so cute. Having a pet makes you not feel lonely.

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A pet

I want to raise a pet again.

I would like to have a cat or a dog.

They look so cute.

When I was a children, I raised duck, roostera duck/ducks, a rooster/roosters and a cat.

But they died very early.

So I felt sadly at that time.

Now IBut now I'm grown up, so I can begin to accept death/I can accept death more easily.

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Me too! I want to raise a cat so bad

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Tsuki

Jan. 11, 2025

20

Yeah,my friend cat isso cute!

When I was a children, I raised a duck, a rooster and a cat.

So I felt sadly at that time.

Now Ithat I am a grown up, I can begin to accept death.

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Tsuki

Jan. 11, 2025

20

Very thanks!

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I want to raise a pet again.


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I would like to have a cat or a dog.


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They look so cute.


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When I was children, I raised duck, rooster and a cat.


When I was a children, I raised a duck, a rooster and a cat.

When I was a children, I raised duck, roostera duck/ducks, a rooster/roosters and a cat.

When I was a children, I raised a duck, a rooster and a cat.

"children" is for more than one child.

But they died very early.


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So I felt sadly at that time.


So I felt sadly at that time.

So I felt sadly at that time.

So I felt sadly at that time.

Now I grown up, I can begin to accept death.


Now Ithat I am a grown up, I can begin to accept death.

Now IBut now I'm grown up, so I can begin to accept death/I can accept death more easily.

Now I(that) I've grown up, I can begin to accept death.

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